Reviews for Black Pearl
UnicornTalesLol chapter 1 . 3/4
Jesus Christ. This was actually pretty cool. Any chance you'll make a second part?
UnicornTalesLol chapter 1 . 3/4
Jesus Christ. This was actually pretty cool. Any chance you'll make a second part?
Jacqueline310 chapter 1 . 2/28
Prepare yourself, I will be flattering. XD

The depth you go into for this story is amazing.

You show in extreme detail on how Danny reverted into insanity, and how he reacted. The way you started this, was magical and deep. You gave the readers a chance to feel the type of pain and loneliness that Danny went through. Also, I love the way you put Phantom in there as a sort of yandere type of person. You perfected the way of a person ‘with voices in their head’ and split personalities. Yes, phantom is a part of Danny, but you captured the addiction and loyalty these two have on each other.

Also, just the way you write is amazing. The amount of detail you put into the into Danny’s head and past events is wonderful. Simply put, you are an amazing writer who pays attention to detail. I hope you continue on with your writing, and keep on making as talented stories!

Jacqueline
Luna Starbuster chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
This was a incredibly sad, creepy, yet sweet story. I have say...it was amazingly written.
xTCatxx chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
Wow so wasn't that dan x danny since hes the one that was inside
cw chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
Well, I have nothing to say except that this was pretty well written for a one-shot. Great job.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
Loved it!
TheWeirdOneCH chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
Cute and dark
Clevermoon chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
MORE MORE MORE MORE MOOOOORE! SO BEAUTIFUL!
AlternateInverse chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
It was so disturbing...

I LOVE IT.
Hinop chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Well this was creepy good but creepy.
But seriously it's really good XP
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
AWESOME TASTIC. I love the craziness and darkness. This is incredible. I was grinning like a maniac throughout this whole thing. It's so realistic and dark and...AH! Wonderful!
Ruby 1334 chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Wow...
That was...
Dark...
So very VERY
dark.
Most...
Complex fan fic I've ever read.
Truly, amazing detail.
Keep up the good work!
SoraLink chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
I. Can't. Handle. That was perfection. Oh my God. I can't even fathom. Just... holy shit, wow.
lollileahpop chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
... ... ... ... wow... ... just wow... that... that was so beautiful... and yet so... horrifying, how did you write such a work of art. I am very impressed
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