|Reviews for The Companion|
| my own hell chapter 13 . 3/8
l love it, l love it, l love your story.
| Priya chapter 13 . 10/29/2013
That was amazing! You wrote it beautifully and I could feel every characters' emotions. The ending was beautiful and I'm so sad to have finished it! It was brilliant, I'm so glad I stumbled upon it! There isn't a single thing I would change or criticize
| jewelpearl chapter 13 . 10/25/2013
I really, really love this story. You have made it so AU, that it could stand as an original fiction if you remove the Hunger Games references, a la 50 Shades of Grey. You would need to flesh out a little more, for example, what exactly is the purpose of a handmaiden being tied to a companion. Maybe a little more about the expectations, history, duties of handmaidens. I really like that the companions usually come from the nobility and are generally a respected part of society. I think fleshing out the history and strata of this society would also be intersting and add a lot.
Hunger Games removals:
lose the idea of "prep teams"; create your own world free of the Capitol and districts (e.g. Divergent's whole world is a futuristic, partially ruined Chicago); instead of the difference between Capitol born/district born, you might have someone born in a named central city, surrounded by various rural "counties" "burbs" etc.; of course, change the character/Peacekeeper names, although the personalities can remain the same; don't call it a rebellion... maybe an uprising...
Anyway, these are just a few thoughts. I think you could even get a trilogy out of this. The epilogue hints as a 2nd story. I NEVER, NEVER write this much in a review. That MUST mean I really, really enjoyed it. Well done...
| klovely chapter 13 . 9/12/2013
freaking loved this story ! and I love your writing its beautiful I spent my day off consumed in this story Thank you
| inmyfavor chapter 8 . 9/11/2013
Its to much drama. I hope a reward soon ... A smut reward will be better. ;)
| inmyfavor chapter 3 . 9/10/2013
Hi! Your story caught me completely! I just dont understand why Peeta doesnt contemplate katniss as his couple if this isnt forviden. I know you already finish this but I cant find you on tumblr ... Could you answer me please?
| mackie80 chapter 13 . 5/26/2013
Thank you for sharing your story. I enjoyed it very much! If I may offer a little advice, it might be helpful to use a grammar checker if you have one. I noticed a fair amount of errors, but your excellent storytelling certainly makes it easy to overlook. The ending wasn't quite what I had expected. However, I really liked it. It even leaves things open enough to have a sequel. Thank you again for sharing your talent!
| squirrelonfire chapter 13 . 4/14/2013
Thank you so much for writing this it was so good I love it I love u
| squirrelonfire chapter 12 . 4/13/2013
| squirrelonfire chapter 10 . 4/13/2013
I don't accept this
| squirrelonfire chapter 9 . 4/13/2013
OH MY GOD MY HEART OS SINGING AND SO ARE THE ANGELS
| ladyy-dee chapter 13 . 4/13/2013
Aw I LOVE THIS STORY ! It's so unique
| squirrelonfire chapter 8 . 4/12/2013
OMG IG GAPPENED
| squirrelonfire chapter 7 . 4/12/2013
Oh my gOD!
| squirrelonfire chapter 6 . 4/12/2013
I never want this to end