Reviews for What Is Wrong
mirror-bluemoon chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
i really want to know what happen to them nextplease continue
kurie-tibiti chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Looks very interesting so far and I hope to see more soon.
g3njutsu chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
aw
otaku-chan chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Its tooo short, but i like it . Im very curious . Please update soon
BrokenBlackCat chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Interesting! :D
anon chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
to short but good
Alyss Penedo chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Some grammar mistakes here and there, but overall it's an interesting idea; will you follow up on it?
Alyss chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
You should totally continue this :D
dark-sparks chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Ohh I like It I wanna know what mataoba wants plz continue xx
Krylancelo chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Poor Natsume and Tanuma
Hotaru-Ren chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
continue plz I really craving the next chapter ;A;
Sorrowfulchild chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Interesting ! I like it , please update quickly !