Reviews for Alone in Darkness, Together in Death
RippedInHalf chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I loved how you said "alone in darkness/ but together in death." It made you think about the feelings of the hated. I thought that you did a wonderful job portraying the characters and would like to tell you to keep writing because this shows that you are going somewhere. (By somewhere i mean a good place, not a well XD)
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Excellent :)
Samara'sdad13 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Very nice sad and sweet...I miss my girls...
wE nEver sleep...
Amanda K. Teals chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Wow, what an amazing poem. It was just sooo amazing! I loved it. Definetely one of my favourites ;)
LuluCalliope chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
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One of the best poems I have read on this site. That is just about all I have to say about this.

I love the title. I love the metaphors. I love the imagery. I love the first four lines, in particular. I love this!

Great work!