Reviews for The Rival That Wasn't
Karissa chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This was absolutely fantastic! I loved 3
Grizzo chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Wow, another one I haven't reveiwed. This was cute. Amazing what you will do to get another's attention...thx...gr
chele the original chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
heart wrenching to anger to lust to love to always.o]
aStubbornRose chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
Very sweet.
ChefJayla chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
awww, that's so cute!
featherme chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
I loved this! Thanks for writing.
twi nana chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
sigh-Always...
smelsies chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
That was awesome, I really loved it.
odiejae chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
loved it! how sweet of jasper to go through all of that just to get closer to edward. i loved when edward pieced everything together, that lightbulb moment. great job!
jennayg123 chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
I loved this! Such a unique idea!
MorbidEmoBarbie chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
I like this. The interactions are very natural. Great work.
harrytwifan chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Great job, I loved it!

Nancy
Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Loved this! So sweet!
luvinlapush chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
holy hell what a dream come .bout time someone gets there happy ending thank you it rocked
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
I was feeling badly for Edward in the beginning, but not so much anymore :-) I loved that Jasper did all that to get Edward to notice him. Sweet o/s, I really enjoyed this.
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