Reviews for Grey Skies and Sunshine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() omg its amazing :D cant wait for the rest :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for more :) |
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![]() ![]() I think that this shows a very good point of view of what could have happened. It's very light and kind of cheery which how you've written it is good. I think you do a great job of trying to sound how they do and it makes your writing better. Keep doing great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a delightful start! This certainly put a smile on my face. I enjoyed your version of how he proposed and can't wait to see where you go with this. My guess is if we are at 12 years and it took 15 according to MJ things may not go so smoothly. ;) |