Reviews for Once Upon A Time
B Dizzy chapter 11 . 7/16
this is very good different but the same, I only have one problem and it's not your fault you are trying to keep it real as you can but does Peeta always have to be such a liability and injury prone clutz.I would love to find a story were Peeta sets out to protect Katniss and actually does some damage other than distraction. He gives us wannabe hero guy's a bad example, his intentions are brave but he's too big a guy to get hurt in every scuffle Rue would probably at least break his nose or a finger or toe.
EdDbookfan1018 chapter 27 . 4/17
This was a fun story & I am excited to read the sequel.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9
Is this based on the movie or the book?
Guest chapter 21 . 7/7/2014
awesome
Guest chapter 17 . 7/7/2014
not cool do you know your not supposed to have sex when ur pregnant
Guest chapter 8 . 7/7/2014
awesome like catching fire
Guest chapter 5 . 7/7/2014
cuute
SlowlyDivergingAllAtOnce chapter 22 . 6/15/2014
lol, 'and let everyone touch my stomach, which I am totally not ok with' thats sooo Kat!
SlowlyDivergingAllAtOnce chapter 21 . 6/15/2014
that was an AMAZING and beautiful speech...
SlowlyDivergingAllAtOnce chapter 19 . 6/15/2014
but but but but but if you did that to them, the kid would only be three months old... and that wouldn't be fair and im sorry, I don't know how to im you... I sowwy. I LOVE THE IDEA THO!
SlowlyDivergingAllAtOnce chapter 9 . 6/14/2014
lol,dont those two needs some sleep? ANYWAYS ill push you out of a tree or somwthing.. ARENT YOU SWEET? OK SOI THAT WAS PRICELESS ALSO, that's something me and m best friend would say to each other- but not in the weird, lovey-dovey kind of way, jus t the joking kind of way,,,

That thing at the bottom is just like.. And it hurts, like im being stabbed, but yet it feels good. SO BASICALLY GETTING STABBED in your v*g*na feels amazing... - completely gross, by the way..
SlowlyDivergingAllAtOnce chapter 5 . 6/14/2014
OMIGOD I COULD NNOOTT STOP LAUGHING REAT JOB I LOOVVEEE THIS STORY I CANT WAIT FOR THE INTERViEws! :D m :) I bet her mom is freaking out..! O GOD. I BET HHIIISS MOM IS FREAKING OUt, probably abusing his brothers right now because he isn't there to abuse/...
Mermaidsintheolympics142 chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
I love this story. It is literally the first fanfic I've ever read and I love it. I have requested it to all of my friends and they all love it. I love you and all of your story's and I hope you write more.
Jess chapter 11 . 3/4/2014
I have read up to chapter 11 and WOW! I started reading fanfiction when I was not pleased with the ending to Mockingjay and I have to say, everything I didn't like about the original books you changed so perfectly! You have an amazing talent!
That Guy chapter 25 . 2/27/2014
I don't know if anyone else noticed. Or even if you noticed that Blye could be related to Katniss, seeing as her mother was the apothecary's daughter...
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