|Reviews for The Demon and the Dead Man|
| Haru chapter 24 . 7/22
This is such an original idea! and I'm loving it so far! update soon please, I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Original Weirdo chapter 3 . 7/1
Is Izuna a kid or a grown man? In the last chapter the adults called him a man and now has Ino's age?
| Original Weirdo chapter 2 . 7/1
The flow is kind of off, but it is still a good story!
| TangyCitrus chapter 24 . 6/3
Hmm, it's very interesting and different from how things usually go or would have gone should Izuna not be in the picture and not be how he is. I am loving his characterization and how he treats, takes care of, and relates to Naruto; is it back to a sibling relationship or are they still more like parent-figure and child? Well, they take care of each other so maybe they're on more equal ground and it doesn't entirely matter.
Things in the last few chapters were relatively calm and slow, but with Izuna's new team, Mizuki probably being made ANBU, Naruto teaching, and maybe a few other things, the story's headed in a direction I don't know what will happen and how and I've lost my train of thought so I dont ... Hopefully whatever I've said has made some sense...sorry...
By the way, what happened to Kakashi?
Thank you for writing and sharing this!
Take care and have fun!
| jrb chapter 16 . 3/22
OK I've tried to see a point in how slow your writing the plot and all I can come up with is you don't know either A how to get the ball rolling or B what your even writing about I'm done have a nice day.
| BearsLikeCandy chapter 24 . 1/29
Please continue this! Please please please! I'd be so happy if you did.
| Web - The Black-Cyber Merc chapter 1 . 1/20
Ain't a damn thing in this sorry excuse for a community that has to do with an evil Naruto and one who doesn't give a rats ass about Konoha the home of Hypocrites.
Go screw all of yourselves you dumb fuck Kishimoto lovers!
| pikachucat chapter 24 . 12/4/2014
| Cindar chapter 24 . 11/18/2014
This seem like an interesting story, I like it how you deviate from canon.
| Marz1 chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
Interesting start with a rarely used character. 13
| SuperVegitoFAN chapter 22 . 10/29/2014
Who i. Wave reads dbz?
| SuperVegitoFAN chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
How the helm did a 3 yrold naruto put his mattress on fire... lol
| Guest chapter 24 . 10/24/2014
| semexx chapter 3 . 10/5/2014
Well, that's completely wrong. It was Izuna who didn't trust the Senju and was against an alliance.
| shadowxxx chapter 24 . 9/27/2014
i hope your still writing this lol i spend all night reading to this chapter and can wait for the next :)