Awwww what a sweet ending
This was such a great story - I loved the plot itself, how the different characters interacted with each other, how Hughes responded to the truth about Ed and Al as well as how happy they are to share the truth with Gracia and spend time with the family!
And when Ed asks Hughes how he deals with situations like this and Ed looks up at his brother - there were so many moments in this where you portrayed emotions in such a subtle yet beautiful way
Oh, and Ed slowly warming up to the Hughes' family right at the beginning was so incredibly adorable
It was wonderfully written and kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time!
I absolutely loved it!

Great! I just wish there was more parental Mustang!

read this story on ao3, but since i don’t really use it, i’m gonna write my review here. this was so amazing and entertaining to read! i love how well you portrayed the characters and their dynamics! definitely gonna keep going back to this story

Wow! This is absolutely not what I expected from a “camping trip gone wrong” story, and I mean that in the best way possible. Parts of this story had me almost in tears from laughing so hard and others were truly heart-rending. Your portrayal of the characters’ relationships and interactions was spot on. Excellent work!

This was so good. I'm glad I took the time to read this. I especially loved how you included Gracia and Elicia!

3 I love this. Amazing story and great character interactions.

This is a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Oh, rip out my heart and stamp on it, why don't you.

Great fic! I really enjoy the characterization, you were spot on and did a great job showing each of their characters. Pieces like Maes view of it as a puzzle and Ed's bad temper fit so well and made the story all the more captivating. Thanks for all the hard work you put into this!

One of the best fma stories i have read! At first I didn't like the kidnapping twist, i was enjoying the bonding and it all happened so fast (first night!). But the bonding continued during their ordeal. Kudos for that! I kinda missed Roy a bit in this story and All as well. The focus seems to be placed more on Ed en Maes. Which was perfectly fine. I loved it. And I'm going to look for more stories just like this. Keep forever writing! ;) V.

Oh Papa Maes is just the best (His death is probably the most traumatic thing anime has done to me). Great story. The oc's did their job for the story without being intrusive. The tension never left the plot. I couldn't put it down.

Why? Why would you write that conversation? That's just cruel dramatic irony T_T Hughes...

The boys being boys always gets meside note: Hughes' observations are hilarious and thoughtful... just like the man himself

Oh Maes is such a sweetheart. I'm aching for Al right now

You make my heart ache with how good this is.