Reviews for It's All So Gratifying
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
I really loved this story I do its wonderful please do more of this story
TheOneTwoPunch chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
I have read and reread this fic so many times; I just adore it that much!
It all felt so realistic, the way Ted reacted to being victimized and violated. It was actually quite heartbreaking! A strong part of me wanted to KILL the Once-Ler and let Ted go free or hug his sorrows away. And the way you portrayed the Once-Ler as a predator was dreadfully real. He was so sadistic and evil and relentless. It was so sickening and wonderful at the same time!
When he had Ted backed up against his desk and his smile turned into something much more malicious, I could imagine perfectly the disturbed grin on his face and the crazed, lusty look in his eyes. *Shudders* And when he taunted Ted, mentioning his father leaving him, and at the end, where he brushed noses with Ted stating that he said he would do anything for a tree I just... So creepy.
I actually LOVE the AU you set for this fic. It makes sense. When I was watching the movie, it didnt make much sense to me why his powerful role in the community suddenly went away as soon as the last Truffula Tree was cut down. By the looks of how much money he had, despite not having a Thneed business anymore, he appeared to be pretty much set for life.
Well anyway, this is perfect as a one-shot but a bit of a tease if you ask me! I would love love love LOVE to read a continuation of this! I want to see what Teds week with The Once-Ler was like! (That sick bastard, I love him so much...)
Oh! And one other thing! When you had The Once-Ler harshly bite Teds ear, I just really like how you included that! It made me feel as if The Once-Ler had a sense of ownership on Ted at that point, kind of like a mock sense of affection, heh heh.
Well, I loved this! Nice work!
Kanna Kullen chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
I don't know if anyone's said this yet but have you thought of writing the week Ted stayed. I do like this story but it feels like a cliff hanger. Please please, if you still even interested in this movie/fanfiction, would you write a fanfic of Ted's week with the Once-ler?
ThatSummerInWonderland chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Please continue this is amazing! Poor Ted! :)
dayhorsedraco123 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
i honestly liked this fic and wish it was extened ...rather MORE CHAPTERS!
CRL chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Do you have any stories with happy endings? That'd be nice
MyNameIs chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I didn't find this fic dark that much... I mean you should see some of the other stuff out there. o.o I agree we do need lots more. This couple is incredibly sexy, it's one of my favorite ones! (I mean there really isn't a lot of pairings to choose from anyway...) I really enjoyed the story. It was very well written, but I think that you could play around with it some more, like adding more chapters to it and making it a multi-chapter. (or make a sequel since it's complete) Like maybe you could see how Once-ler/Ted's relationship plays out in that week. You could make Ted slowly responsive to Once-ler, like actually enjoying the things they do. c; And maybe even make Ted initiate it. (good god that would be amazing) I think that this is one of the best Once-ler/Ted fic that's out there, I enjoyed it a lot. I really hope you continue with it, it would turn out great (and make my day!) I just know it.
Continue the good work! (:
Delir chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
You should make this into a series of oneshots. Omg that would be amazing. Lol dont worry you didnt scar me at all, it was well-writtena nd i liked how it went so your good. I reallllly hope you make some more OnclerxTed because your really good at this.
XxxLeslieXxx chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Ahhh this is such a sexy and dark story! Make a sequal plz, I will never get tired of reading this fanfiction1
Hanyoualchemist1 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Well...that...was...something. But I liked it. A little gross, but good all the same.
Mattyxmk chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
I loved this so so much! Please let their be more! Your writing style and how you captured the characters is amazing
Abbeybear chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
I'm not sure whether to be horrified or in love with this. It was so..dark. But amazing. I love this it was so fantastically wondrous. I wish there was more to it but fantastic job! 3 :D but my image of the onceler may be much different now. Haha good writing though, love this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Amazing amazing. Sequel please? This fic desperately needs it! :D
White Wolf 64 KEG chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
That was awesome, there will be more chapters soon right? I'm from the Once-ler only part of the fandom but I like how Ted was used in this
Rebel-Angel6 chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Wow... this is... amazing! I keep re-reading this over and over and its awesome It's perfect as a one-shot (but I'm not gonna lie, a sequel WOULD be amazing too XD)

Good Job
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