Reviews for Heir of the Senju
Monster King chapter 14 . 3/24
Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on the story.
andrew.hark90 chapter 14 . 1/23
okay your story is good, but you lost my respect when you discontinued it. it was good where it was you should have just continued it.
Kaito Hatake Uchiha chapter 14 . 12/9/2016
mmmm

Kaito is hungry, he wants to eat
Last true Naruto fan chapter 8 . 12/2/2016
Immature Naruto fanfiction
Dragoncyber22 chapter 14 . 5/5/2016
continues the story
narutobeta chapter 14 . 5/13/2015
It's been 3 years come on
Kaneko352 chapter 14 . 1/28/2015
Ur writing WASNT pathetic ok? The ppl who say that r idiots so..?
Kaneko352 chapter 9 . 1/28/2015
Isn't naruto already a chunin? I thought he might get promoted to jonin after the mission.
Kaneko352 chapter 6 . 1/28/2015
Lemon... :8
evilpyro13 chapter 14 . 12/23/2014
For your first fanfic it wasnt bad i could hardly stop reading it but i do have a few suggestions, try not to use so many time skips it kinda takes alot out of the story, i noteced that you miss spelled a few words so try not dping that as often and i also noticed that a couple times a few of the characters names got mixed up when said mixed up character wasnt presented recently but besides those minor things your first fanfic was great it had suspence and romance it had action that was well described i really did like the part when naruto first saw might guy's eyebrows. all in all it was pretty great
Kybi-No-Akuma chapter 14 . 11/3/2014
I must admit it is a pity you stopped writing this as I have been enjoying it the if you do decide to restart it then fantastic but if not then well done for staying with this story as long as you have

Ky├╝bi-No-Akuma signing off
"ja ne"
killer4853 chapter 5 . 6/22/2014
like
MoKhan97 chapter 14 . 12/20/2013
i was loving the story man. great story
Daedric X chapter 14 . 10/5/2013
Not sure if you still look at the reviews since your last update was a year ago... Still update this please. This story is unique in its own rights lol. Keep it up
Armageddonfish chapter 14 . 9/11/2013
Good story, sad that you ended it. but man Kurenai had really bad luck, almost raped then kidnapped and finally losing her child. all by the same man.
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