Reviews for Payback
Guest chapter 2 . 12/9/2015
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 2 . 10/16/2014
Okay, that was fairly good, but there were multiple errors and words left out that needed to be there. The plot was interesting, but I'm sure you could redo this to make it twice as good and without any errors. Keep working at it!
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
OOOOoooooooooooo, I like this! Nicely done, though a bit longer perhaps would be better.
Have a Little Feith chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
Kinda skimmed a bit near the end. Was it a full-blown lemon? Or just a bit of lime?
Pessimism chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
Okay I hate virtually all crossovers and I have no clue why people right them but you did a good job but it also helps that you used like my two favorite character you should right a payback 2 for when naruto gets revenge
mikethepokemaster chapter 2 . 5/13/2012
like the two-shot and i would be glad if you did some more one-shots of Naruto and Artemis
BlackJoker013 chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
The Red Star chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
And once again we have proof that subtlety is useless with Naruto. You'd think they'd pick that up just by speaking to him... Anyway, I will admit that I'm curious as to what this payback will be. I'm quite eager to find out.

There weren't nearly as many errors in this chapter, and none of them were really bothersome. I look forward to the next chapter.

Forever in the Sky,

The Red Star
The Red Star chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Very good. I've got to say, out of all the Naruto/Young Justice pairings I've read, Naruto/Artemis seems to be the one that would work the best. I mean, their personalities just seem to mesh better. You do a good job of highlighting that.

The first half has a few errors, though they're not annoying enough for me to present them. I like this story, though the end AN forces me to ask; Where's the Naruto/Donna? Unless I haven't gotten to that one yet, you're holding out on us, my friend. Not nice.

Forever in the Sky,

The Red Star
snake1980 chapter 2 . 5/6/2012
the chapter may be short but still it was a great chapter like how u started fighting then there all over each other. i hope u have a few more chapters of this story and cant wait to see what happends when the rest of the group finds out that there togeather. keep u the great work and looking forward to what ever u write nexts
Batros940 chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
I think it would be interesting to give this another one or two chapter to continue it.
deadw8 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Ok ur work is asome so if ur interested i got a ff were it naruto/artamis cff were naruto is the son of brainac and has all is knowledge and powers and fights for good would start around the starotech episode pm me if ur intrested
SSJ3kyuubi chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Ha! I loved the ending and the chemistry between naruto and artemis in this fic. You did your usual thing kyuubi.