Reviews for No Paradise
Ayesha Altugle chapter 1 . 3/2/2015
Interesting idea. Shows some promise. Could be great after an edit or two.
gabyhyatt chapter 11 . 2/13/2015
It was a great end, i hope you do a sequel or an epiligue
gabyhyatt chapter 10 . 2/8/2015
I hope the found soon about Natalie. She is working with demons or maybe with Gideon?
gabyhyatt chapter 9 . 1/27/2015
So, Natalie is bad, but she is with others right?
SVUfan94 chapter 8 . 1/16/2015
I just started reading this about an hour ago and couldn't put it down! Bow I'm done and all out of chapters! Please update soon
carameldip18 chapter 8 . 12/16/2014
This story is amazing i just started reading it and i love it
gabyhyatt chapter 8 . 12/12/2014
Poor Leo, at least these people where bad. He didn't have to balme himself
gabyhyatt chapter 7 . 11/8/2014
Natalie is so annoying. On the other hand I don't get why there is no fruit in that island. There should be cocunuts or at least bananas. I'm from Panamá by the way.
gabyhyatt chapter 6 . 8/20/2014
I hope the found them soon. Is Paige going to be in this fic?
gabyhyatt chapter 2 . 8/8/2014
i wonder if the elders put them there. Please update soon
gabyhyatt chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
I wonder if the elders put them there
Guest chapter 5 . 7/11/2012
Interesting story!
Patty chapter 5 . 5/19/2012
Great chapter I really loved it! One of the best ones yet. I actually just read it I hadn't checked to see if it was updated but as soon as I saw it I read it. Great job keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what happens next.
PiperLeo chapter 5 . 5/18/2012
great chapter :)
Patty chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
I've been reading your story since you started but hadn't reviewed its a very interesting story and I'm totally caught up in it good job
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