|Reviews for Mind Triplex|
| MrGoodyTwoShoes chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
You should consider switching from dashes (-) to quotation marks ("") for your dialogue. Many here would consider what you've done as chat/script format which isn't allowed. Your story could get reported needlessly over it.
| Jaki Stratos chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Metal gear stealth, um let's just give him some justu powered power armor while were at it, like the idea though faved and followed