|Reviews for The Fifth Forman|
| Goldenbassets chapter 12 . 10/10/2017
My heart breaks for Hyde, what a crap deal he got with Bud and Edna. He was so lucky to have the Forman's and Jackie. And I adore Jackie being a Forman. You combine the best of both worlds in creating a Jackie Forman. Her best features and none of her annoying traits. I love how worried Jackie is about Hyde. she doesn't push or shriek. she holds him and gently twists his arm until she gets her way;)
| Goldenbassets chapter 8 . 10/10/2017
It's nice to see Eric in the protective brother mode. Definitely not something you're used to, but also, let Jackie and Hyde love each other, man! I do enjoy the secret lovin' though much hotter that way.
| Goldenbassets chapter 7 . 10/10/2017
Oh Hyde! Love that insecure adorable guy.
| Goldenbassets chapter 6 . 10/10/2017
I liked it! Hyde admitted he had feelings for Jackie, they weren't just messing around and I felt the feels, plus I could totally picture Red glaring at Eric and softening up for Jackie, his pumpkin. Too funny.
| Goldenbassets chapter 1 . 10/10/2017
Yes! Love it and can't wait to read more. Love the spin on Jackie as the fifth Forman. Of course she's the favorite kid, she's perfect in the family.
| madrebelhunter chapter 18 . 9/25/2017
Awesome story sad its over but glad you gave it a sweet ending
| Aqua chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
Can u continue this?
| beeboplee chapter 18 . 12/24/2016
Awesome story, great job!
| itsreykenobi chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
Hiya! I know it's been a while since you posted this, but I figured reviews are always nice to get, right? This was a really great first chapter - I loved how you just jumped straight into the pilot (and the Jackie/Hyde relationship!, it all flowed really well. I kind of struggle seeing Jackie and Eric as related, but hey, it's fiction! Besides, I love how you've kept Jackie's personality bitchy, but not quite as bitchy as it was in the show. It's a nice blend :)
Loved the little details as well - especially Hyde just casually offering Jackie a sip of his beer without really saying anything :) Those kind of moments are always my favourite between these two, they're always so sweet! I'm interested in finding out where the relationship goes without any of the "Kelso-drama", haha
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
This is quite easily one of my favorite fanfictions of all time. I came across this two years ago and I fell in love the mere idea. I've read this time and time again- it's just really good. I'm a fan.
| Clementine Buttersnaps chapter 18 . 11/6/2014
I loved this! I wish there were more Jackie and Eric sibling stories.
It's a few years too late but you mix up your words a lot and use him when it should be her and vice versa.
| CasieGracie96 chapter 17 . 3/14/2014
I think that it would be awesome if you continued onto the other seasons! I love this story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
It's a little strange that someone else is saying Jackie's lines. It seems like you aren't so much writing Jackie as Eric's sister, but instead just giving Eric a random sister who happens to be called Jackie's name, and changing the real Jackie's name to Pam. I am going to try a few more chapters, but I'm nervous that Jackie is going to be a Mary Sue.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
So, what, if some of the scenes are directly from the show? I enjoyed this to an extend. This is one of those fanfictions, I can read- over, and over; and still cry, over the little things, even laugh. Ugh. You're an amazing writer. :)
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/16/2013
I totally love how you wrote this. It was a really great story and you are an excellent writer. This is one of my fav stories that I have read on here! :)