|Reviews for PEGASUS Book 12 Return to the Colonies|
| waffenmac chapter 12 . 10/27
awesome chapter and story hope it continues, thank you for sharing
| beebinator chapter 12 . 9/7
I was extremely surprised and pleased to see that you are continuing this story. I look forward to reading all updates as they are posted. Again thank you
| Ari989 chapter 12 . 7/7
Excellent update! It's the mark of a good story when it's so easy to get back into the flow of the story after a long time since reading it. I'm looking forward to seeing if Gene and Tricia can make a difference in preventing the disaster at Kobol, but more importantly to finally answering the questions on what happened with the Cylons and the other Colonial survivors. Until next time, keep up the good work!
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 12 . 7/5
you live yay update
| K chapter 8 . 5/5
This is frakking awesome.. Now I have to go back and read the previous stories...
| dA-Lurker chapter 1 . 5/1
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You continuously kept drawing the characters from "Phineas & Ferb", "Johnny Test" and "Fairly Oddparents" aged up with enlarged breasts and buttocks when in the cartoon they are all minors. To make matters worse, you depicted them in sexual outfits and situations. Nobody is trolling you, so drop the victim act. You are a grown man in your late 40's. Start acting your age. Start following the rules or leave the website.
| jack.burginjr chapter 11 . 4/30
great story , when is it going to be updated ?
| waffenmac chapter 11 . 4/23
Oh my this story is awesome I hope you continue it I will go back and review all the chapters when I reread this fantastic story
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 11 . 3/31
| Jack Burgin chapter 11 . 9/3/2014
| cklammer chapter 11 . 1/14/2014
Nice, well-written and succinct.
| Ari989 chapter 11 . 1/12/2014
Wow, so it is the Cylons after all. I was sure that the "intelligences" were some form of the "angels" that made their appearance so often in the series. But their bullheadedness on carrying out the same "experiment" over and over (despite failure being a sign of their idea being wrong) can only be Cylon. Thanks for updating!
| historyBuff2000 chapter 10 . 12/29/2013
This Story is getting better and better as I read more. Excellent Chapter, can hardly wait to read more.
| Ari989 chapter 10 . 12/29/2013
This chapter had a little too much filler, describing in detail as each ship jumped, but it's good to see that they're finally at their destinations. I'm surprised that they've found nothing so far, not even signs that the space and planets they're surveying were ever occupied by people. Is it possible that the colonies and other parts of space touched by man and cylon have been 'scrubbed' clean? Can't wait to find out! Thanks for updating!
| MalSer chapter 10 . 12/29/2013
Enjoyed the recent string of chapters, thanks for the updates. I just hope they continue (lol) as things are getting very interesting! As always, excellent work.