|Reviews for People aren't always as they seem|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
A little different, nice!
Love the names!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
im not sure where you are going with this but your other peices were great so i will give it a shot
| AlanSkylar chapter 2 . 6/6/2012
So mean. I'm only on the second chapter and your making Ben seem like JT and Cash combined. Bro, you transformed a hero into a mega dick/douchebag. I consider major rewrite, I like where your going with the story but I don't like the beginning entirely. Sorry
| omega-z man chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I love that.
| Techtron chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
Instead of "rolls" it should be "roles"
| bowow0708 chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
So much sweet fluffiness here, it almost gave me a cavity. . .
| bowow0708 chapter 3 . 4/15/2012
Well that was resolved quickly. . . Plus one for the classic anime style "Soon to be lovers" Snow White plot where they kiss and fall in love ect.
| bowow0708 chapter 2 . 4/12/2012
An interesting concept this is a nice story so far.
And it is spelled recess
reassess is a totally different word
| dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
This is a good story. Please continue. Ben and Gwen forever.
| Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
why did gwen say her last name is/was fox when the rest of the chapter (and cannon) says tennison?