|Reviews for Mass Effect: Beginnings|
| Alpenwolf chapter 52 . 2/17
Ilos was quite the adventure, not as much as other planets, but an adventure of other sorts at least. People could have learned so much from ilos if they would have found it earlier ... but being in the terminus systems and the mu portal being lost for a very long time it's no wonder they didn't find it ... a shame, really. Could have changed the world so much ... would be an idea for an AU story xD
| Alpenwolf chapter 51 . 1/22
That was one of the points where Joker showed the galaxy why he was one of the best pilots alive, with the possibilty that he is the best.
| Alpenwolf chapter 50 . 1/2
Regarding the lock down event ... I surely would pay for a dlc that would enable me to punch udina or any council member
| RedBeardJim chapter 50 . 1/2
You have too been a fugitive on the run, Tali. That's how they met you, remember? :)
| Alpenwolf chapter 49 . 1/2
Damn, what a trip until I made it here. Gotta say it was worth it, really worth it. You haven't got nearly enough favs or reviews in regards of this masterpiece you wrote here. If I can help in adding this story to my favs, then I will do it (would have done it regardless :P)
I quite like how slow the progress between Shepard and Alenko was. Gave it a bit more sincerity and reality than I'm used to read. Not that I'm complaining here, I'm not. I am standing behind your decisions and fully agree with them.
Cerberus. You really managed to get a good story out of those few garbled missions we had in ME1. For that I can only congratulate you. For that and this story so far. Good work. Really good work.
| Alpenwolf chapter 47 . 1/2
I think at that situation everyone would have taken a step back from shepard (maybe except chakwas who would have gone forward and maybe slapped her) ... at least died as a soldier, in the midst of what she thought was her duty ... including trying to save as much as she could from a recon team. RIP Gunnery Chief Ashley Madeline Williams
| Alpenwolf chapter 44 . 1/2
It really didn't surprise me that Balak is still alive, I suspected it ... a cockroach doesn't die this easily, that goes for Cerberus, Balak and also for Shepard
| Alpenwolf chapter 40 . 1/1
My my ... quite an emotional chapter, even if it was on the bad side ... this chapter is truly one of the most experienced and broken ones I have seen so far ...
| Alpenwolf chapter 39 . 1/1
this chapter reminds of pragia a bit ... how they say they would go ascension and continue their work there ... sounds like cerberus really did that here (not sure they did that in canon)
| Alpenwolf chapter 38 . 1/1
I usually let her live, the rachni queen ... and I think this was the first time I saw her getting killed in any ME fanfic i've read so far ... but divergence makes up for a good story I've learned
| Alpenwolf chapter 35 . 1/1
"That's ryncol!" ... that line had me laughing for a while XD
| Alpenwolf chapter 27 . 12/31/2013
I just noticed in this chapter that you are using the names of the crew that died with the ship on alcherra ... or at least part of it ... talitha draven ... that name opened my eyes o.O
| Alpenwolf chapter 23 . 12/31/2013
Drama, and more drama ... feros has and ever will be a house of drama ...
| Alpenwolf chapter 22 . 12/31/2013
Odd ... odd is a fitting word ... since I have a dejavu-felling here ... like I read some part of this chapter somewhere else sometime earlier ... but that's probably just my imagination and I just read to much ME fanfics the last months
| Alpenwolf chapter 18 . 12/31/2013
spating in cereal? I'm not sure if I should find that gross or amazing ... I just know I never did it (or at least can't remember doing it)