|Reviews for Digimon Adventure 04|
| TheKingOfGames789 chapter 30 . 3/9
This chapter...was...very divisive for me.
Okay, so on the plus side, I'm overjoyed that Wizardmon is alive (and I bet every other Digimon fan who is reading/had read this fic is even more so), and I'm excited that the parents are getting Digimon.
But then, there's everything else: I DO NOT like how totally stupid everyone is being right now. Okay, so they've been given an ultimatum, and apparently even considering the less popular choice is grounds for disownment; apparently, the DigiDestined aren't as smart or strategic as they're trying to be, because it seemed like nobody (except for maybe Iori/Cody, or even Michael) ever thought about playing along with Kurayami's scheme and then hightail it when they had their friends (they had most of the group's most powerful Digimon, after all). Yes, Gennai would've complained, but (in Azulongmon's words) "Gennai complains about everything".
Seriously, it would've saved quite a bit of heartache if they had done something remotely similar to that.
Just stating my two cents,
| person chapter 5 . 12/8/2013
I thought it was Arukenimon...
| Maronn chapter 50 . 9/1/2013
| Ozuma thy Awesome chapter 8 . 6/22/2013
I don't like Takeru right now. Not like him, but his behavior in this. I don't get it. Has he turned into Daisuke? Coz if he has, what's the point of maturing Daisuke? And Willis, still don't like him.
I can't wait for a Takeru part. I need to read it
| Ozuma thy Awesome chapter 7 . 6/22/2013
But cabins 3-6 would be 4 cabins, and she said she did 3... and ugh
And what's with TK being OBSESSED with food? I'll find out eventually
| Ozuma thy Awesome chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
Kind of sad now. I don't really like Willis. And IDK, but I'm in Tai's corner for the fight, just because. IDK
| teamcan chapter 50 . 1/3/2013
I'm so in love with both 03 and 04 and I'm so excited for 05! You guys are very creative and just plain awesome at writing this. The story was great, the characters were likeable, and even though this was long it never felt dragged out. I would get immersed in the plot and just enjoyed reading this. Great work!
| teamcan chapter 39 . 12/31/2012
Omg I feel like crying over the upcoming fight between the digidestined! Super excited to see how it all goes down though.
| teamcan chapter 37 . 12/30/2012
Loved the fight sequence with Puppetmon! I found it entertaining for Tai and Willis to shout attacks. I also enjoyed Tai's perspective in this chapter too.
| teamcan chapter 26 . 12/30/2012
I really enjoy the bits with the families back on Earth.
I also just realized something. Didn't Noriko have a digivice? And if she is in the Digital World then wouldn't it have returned to her too? This isn't much of an issue, especially since this story is already completed. Just something I noticed.
| teamcan chapter 14 . 12/30/2012
I've been too excited about reading and forgot to review. Anyways this was a great chapter! I loved all the action and can't wait to see what happens next. Also, I want to commend you guys on your writing. It's great how you keep this fanfic in line with the canon.
| Canuck90 chapter 30 . 12/17/2012
Really like how you incorporate different characters into your story. Good story so far!
| crestofknowledge chapter 49 . 11/26/2012
OK, I'm going to combine my 49 and 50 reviews into one mega-review.
Whew...that was wild...and fantastic! I'm going to comment by subject here:
Kura's mother: what's the voice?! And where is she?
Now that Fanglongmon, Gennai, and the Sovereigns are gone, what happens now? Digiworld has very little protection...though I'm not sure how many threats are left (but who are we kidding, there are ALWAYS threats :P). Interested to see where this will lead!
Couples: wooo Koumi! And you two have totally thrown me for a loop with the Taichi/Yamato/Sora love triangle thing that's going on. There's weird tension between Taichi and Sora...but she still loves Matt...and then there's Rei. And every other relationship in this story...but that's neither here nor there and my comments probably aren't helping y'all at all!
Critique: a few things here. First of all, the fairy queen arc began and ended (at least for now- assuming there will be more on her in 05) kind of vaguely. I still have no clue what her purpose is; she kind of seems like a plot device right now? Not that there's anything necessarily wrong with that, but I think you could do a lot with that...but really, I trust your judgment, and this is your story, so you can take my thoughts with a grain of salt :) One other small thing that's probably just me being lazy is that I found the parents' names hard to keep straight besides the Ishida/Takaishi parents. Maybe you could put up some sort of guide if it's not something that would take more than 5 minutes? If not, I suppose I could just go to Google, haha :)
But yeah, this was fantastic. You did a great job of writing multiple in-depth yet followable arcs, and I love the growth in the characters and their relationships with each other. Brilliant! And while I know that you don't enjoy writing certain characters (understandably), you really do do a good job of making them likable. I'm especially impressed with Michael; I was starting to feel a bit sorry for the poor dude. And I take back what I said about him and Noriko, since she's clearly freaking crazy. I'm also happy that things are looking up for Ken and Daisuke. This extends beyond your stories to their portrayal in the series, but I've always felt bad for both of them for various reasons.
I won't say much about this, but I am really looking forward to the Willis arc...without giving away too much of my theory, I think that the fact that Terriermon and Lopmon are *twin* Digimon is going to play a big part :)
OK, that was super long, but I hope it was helpful. Nice work you two, and thanks for writing this- your stories are so much fun to read! Looking forward to the upcoming stories :D
| crestofknowledge chapter 48 . 11/25/2012
Ohhhhhhhh 9 realms! Intriguing...that means that there are 5 that they don't know about...
Love this chapter! The Koumi scene (awww, the laptop...hope he backed up his files) was adorable, and the jogress scene was perfect. Like I've mentioned, you've got me converted to a Koumi supporter...they are written perfectly.
Urazamay- I totally get your frustrations with writing Sora, but I think you do a good job working with that you have. She's one of my least favorite characters -not just in this story; just overall- because she seems so damn boring. Not a whole lot of personality to go on there...
| crestofknowledge chapter 46 . 11/23/2012
Sorry, these are kinda short...I got super busy and can only see the notes I wrote a few weeks back on these few chapters...
-bus scene totally cute...damn you, Sora, for ruining the potential Koumi moment! Wondering how the heck Jou was able to drive a freaking bus...mad props, Jou, mad props!
Dumbledore reference?! Hell yes...love it :D