Reviews for Not Callum
Caitlin chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
PLEASE KEEP GOING :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
Caitlin chapter 2 . 2/22/2014
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cmd789 chapter 2 . 1/19/2014
cool
cmd789 chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
very cool first chapter
Caitlin chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
hi me again I am probably annoying but you just can't finish your story there you have to keep going it's great. If you finish it the begging will stop. love the story but it needs an ending :)
caitlin chapter 2 . 11/3/2013
your story is great and I love it please can you write another chapter, It's so great I can not wait to find out what sligo does to Cal and Ryan keep up the great work.
Caitlin chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Please. please, please continue I love the story and I badly want to know what happens next
squaredroplet chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
i really like this story. i just finished the series and its nice to have something to read again. i hope you update it :)
snoozinghamster chapter 2 . 4/11/2013
This is good, good idea seeing what happens with the twin thing. The other great bit is its before the December book which uffortunalty I can't read due to iTunes mucking me about!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Very well done (: is another chapter coming.
sue chapter 2 . 12/8/2012
Its cool... kept writting :)
ComedyGirl127 chapter 2 . 6/12/2012
Aww, I feel special now :P Never been mentioned in anyone's stories but my friends from school. Sad though, I didn't realise I was your only reviewer :/ I might tell some more of my friends about this story :)

One quick idea: perhapse use a new line when a different character speaks? It isn't too bad and I could still follow it easily, but some people may get confused.

Anyway, loving this story, and I hope you continue writing; I'll always be here to read it. Oh, and if you ever find that when writing a fanfic you just can't get an idea to stick (like me), think about the genre of story you like and write an original. Rather than fanfics of C365- although they are awesome- try an original about a kid who ends up being stuck in the center of a mass gang of people who want them dead for who knows what reason. I tried that, and now I've got 129 pages, 44 chapters, 77,000 something words, plus another two character's POV's of it, AND a backstory of one of the assassins from when he was ten.

The thing with originals is that you can make and kill characters much quicker than fanfics. In my most recent chapter, I made a guy called Cameron, gave him a backstory and then killed him in less than ten lines. I think- with the way you write- that as soon as you have even a vague idea of a plot (to be honest I was writing without a plot until chapter 20) you could just keep going.

Don't let bad reviews (or lack thereof) get you down :)
Comedygirl127 chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Very well done! I love it, and can't wait to see where you take it! :D