|Reviews for new ways to fall apart|
| julamei chapter 1 . 9/7/2016
this story is love. you are brilliant!
| yesmin chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
omg this is so beautiful and sad... love it!
| babybisket chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
How is it possible that I haven't review this? Such lovely, in a sad way, story. I like your style; it flows yet not too flowery and i like how you portray Ichigo even in his grief still somehow fights and realized he still have his pride somewhere. That bit is ever really. It does sound very Ichigo-like.
I also appreciate how unsappy this is, it seems more real this way. Which makes it even sadder reading it.
Thanks for sharing your work with us.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
| eannseachel chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
Beautiful. Very and still. I'm a bit guilty for stumbling upon this piece of yours a few months and not reviewing the first time, the second time, and the many times I've read this that I have actually lost count of it all and it still delivers quite a pang to my heart. You and this story (and maybe even Ichigo) deserves more love than what I can give you :)
| Dreadful Oblivion chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
It was good, really good but next time, it might be better to involve more dialogues since it makes it more interesting.
I really like the fact that you used second person, it's an idea I might steal; hope you don't mind!
I think you really captured Ichigo's feelings well and were able to deliver them beautifully.
| purplepam chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Oh,God. That was amazing! I have no other words to tell you how amazing that was. I loved it! Great job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
honestly this made me so sad you wrote it so beautifully hats off to you
| kNOTdahkawaiiDINOsaur chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
This is beautiful.. *eyes sparkling cuz of the story*
It's a heart warming & clenching story! Waaaa! IchiRuki 4ever! :D
| Cindy chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
This was beautiful and made me cry. I love it. :)
| I like this chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
There aren't many oneshots that I come across that I like. But you were able to fit a lot of story into a short oneshot. I did feel Ichigo was sad, lonely and somewhat confused in this story. But this story really came together nicely and it ended nicely. It wasn't those type of oneshot that left me thinking that is it. Really good. I should check out what else you wrote.
| song for you chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Great story! You did a fantastic job with 2nd Person POV, which can prove difficult to do :)
| CHAPPY chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Oh God...just...beautiful T.T
| anonym chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
ouch...u hurt me too...tq
| SamanthaEscalante chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Nice adaptation of the missing link!