|Reviews for Reflections in the Silver Mist|
| Kaerith chapter 12 . 3/10/2013
What a story! I really enjoyed the details of Snape, George, and Luna classifying the powder from the Urn- I love considering the potential of such a combination of magic and science. Also, the whole anagram riddle (pun unintended) leading to the location of the violet vial was amazing; I have no idea whether it was based on true facts or complete poetic license, and I don't really care, but either way- inspired! The boardinghouse Harry lived in and its residents were great, and I enjoyed the bits about pre-Dumbles Hogwarts having intermural matches and more dances!
Really, this story is of the type of fanfiction that legitimizes fanfiction and proves that it all isn't poorly-written wish-fulfillment. You really took on the challenge of Snape- arguably the most complex character- while delving into epistemological and existentialist philosophy in a fantastical setting. The one thing I reacted negatively to would just be a quibble over personal Rowlingian-world physics, and I wouldn't mention it except that I like to leave well-rounded critiques but can't think of anything else to bring up. :)
Anyway, fantastic work with amazing depth and detail to the characters and world. I am interested to see what Harry and Severus might take on next.
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/24/2013
| Serpent91 chapter 12 . 12/6/2012
well written story!
| Craftsman chapter 12 . 11/14/2012
Great story! Your writing is fabulous and it us so nice to read a story that has obviously had a lot of time and effort put in it. This is the first one of yours that I've read, but definitely won't be the last.
Thank you so much for sharing it and Kim so glad there is a sequel. I almost fell out of my chair when I read 'the end' until I read the next sentence.
| Craftsman chapter 11 . 11/14/2012
So, he has a perfect new body and he's young and he doesn't like it? There's no making that man happy...
| Craftsman chapter 10 . 11/13/2012
Lots to think about. You have a great way of building tension.
| Craftsman chapter 9 . 11/13/2012
So many theories, so many possibilities...
I have to admit, Voldemort was brilliant.
| Craftsman chapter 8 . 11/13/2012
That last paragraph made me laugh, because real life is often quite dull. I'm do curious as to where this is going, but I will find out Snape get a real body, or does he just live with Harry forever...
| Craftsman chapter 7 . 11/13/2012
I really liked that chapter. The different memories were fun to read, though I keep thinking that it must be a bit depressing for Severus to be stuck there. And extendable noses - genius!
| Craftsman chapter 6 . 11/13/2012
This is a fascinating story so far, especially their theories about what happens to a body both in and out of the pensieve. Lots of possibilities there...
Thanks for sharing.
| mycreativeoutlet chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
i love this story! it is a wonderfully unique concept. i love the details, too.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Wonderful! Wonderful interpretation! I can't wait to read the rest!
| Kazza chapter 8 . 8/22/2012
A cute sprite! Tee hee. When you mentioned a pixie I imagined a duel between the 'sprite' and a cornish pixie ... perhaps a wrestling match? :)
| Kazza chapter 7 . 8/22/2012
Too much goodness to highlight any one item...
| Kazza chapter 6 . 8/22/2012
Another wonderful chapter with more addictive banter. Mrs Noakes and her tenants' eccentricities are endearing