Reviews for Only A Boy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Really good update. |
![]() ![]() Genius and thank you do much for updating! I love Merlin's and Draco's interaction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant, naturally Merlin wouldn't be able to handle a wand. I love how you navigated that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Things I like: - The goblins. That they noticed the whole earth... magic... thing... was AMAZING. - "I didn't know you had children." It was completely unnecessary for me to freak out about that as much as I did. It just seems so reminiscent of when there people have a lot of romantic tension and everyone they interact with keeps mistaking them for a couple. "We're not dating!" In this case would be more like, "We're not related!" so yeah, I thought that was amazing. - The Malfoy family is a conglomeration of beautiful, irritating, snarky spoiled brats and you write them wonderfully. The next chapter is going to be AMAZING. I'm interested to see your characterization of Narcissa; I don't remember you ever writing her before. So that'll be fun. - MERLIN'S WAND sweet Jesus that is lovely. Whomping Willow. Brilliant. Also that picture is amazing. This is going to be the coolest ever magic. I'm so freaking excited. Except I totally want Snape to see it and be like, "When did Ollivander start making wands like that?" and then have to deal with that. SPEAKING OF WHICH: - All this deception is going to be amazing when it catches up with him (hopefully much, much later on) and the truth comes out. ANYWAY, yay for fast updates! |
![]() ![]() Haha poor Merlin! Post soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED IT! i can't wait to see how this changes things. also, did merlin put his own hair in the wand? or..? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love this story! I hope Draco and Merlin reach an understanding of sorts, that would be awesome! And Snape is just so amazing in this story! I can't wait for more of this, hope you update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() haaaaahahah, wow this is amazing. I loved how you solved the wand issue. i would have been utterly bored if he just got one or even if he got one "specially made" by ollivander. he didn't even step inside the shop! beautiful! |
![]() ![]() Ooh, cool chapter. I like how Snape is being portrayed in here, and Merlin is simply awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good. Love the story line, can't wait till he goes to Hogwarts. |
![]() ![]() super cool |
![]() ![]() I can't wait until the next chapter. Its very intresting how you've woven together the two stories. I love merlin's interactions with Snape (he's forever destined to be stuck with absolute prats!) Please find it within you to update soon, I'll be checking frequently :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've only seen a few episodes of Merlin and am not really familiar with it. Even so this story is easy to follow. I find most time travel fics a little forced, but this one is really different. I'm enjoying it a lot. Lisa |
![]() ![]() ![]() Snape certainly won't be expecting him to leave with a supposed heirloom. Good job so far, loved the silently regretful Snape after not taking care. Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() Hallo, Nobody here, Alright, alright, you've won me over. Here is a review for you: I really LOVE this story! To be honest, I when I first read the title and description, I was not too enthusiastic. Imagine my delighted surprise when I discovered what a gem this story really is! I do feel terribly bad for poor Merlin though. All his friends are dead . . . Just please, don't close the door on the possibility of him seeing Arthur, Gwen, and all the rest (I mean before death and heaven, of course). I do truly enjoy the idea of a friendship between Merlin and Snape. I always feel sorry for the dislikable characters. Do please update again soon. I almost despaired between this chapter and the last :-) I am, of course, sincerely true, in declaring myself, - Nobody |