Reviews for Midnight Adventure
TheNextAlice chapter 5 . 4/16/2012
Grraaah I had to trawl through the chapter thrice to find this!

"Will, you can it" - you don't need a comma. But that's all!

Well I'm a non-dyslexic, brown-haired Australian!
PrincessOfLiterature chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
This is so cute! :) I love 'mommy' and 'daddy' especially! Please update soon!
MDWOLFGIRL chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
lol england knows his little colonyXD but poor america.
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
"No I meant frog. A mother doesn't call her husband daddy."

England's wrong. Tamaki and Kyouya are a "mommy and daddy", and Kyouya calls Tamaki "daddy".

I wonder what's in the fort. A hot tub? Slot machines? A flat-screen T.V.? Narwhals? Seneca Crane? Hooters waitresses? Guns? Beer? A ping-pong table?
Nutty Nerd chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
Oh, poor America! D: Nice chapter, though. It's nice to see Mommy and Daddy working together while Daddy's beinga pervert XD
TheNextAlice chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
This is soooo cute! Eeek~
Goddess-of-Genius chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
You're probably hear this a lot, but this is an awesome story, and you are doing a great job with this. I keep dying a little from laughter when England and France are bickering, and I find it adorable when Canada and America banter similarly. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Kind Regards,~ Gg
Hehe chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
This is awesome! You should totally post the next chapter! XD
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
Hmmm... I wonder where America and What's-His-Name (I think it's "Foxface") are going.
MDWOLFGIRL chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
Aw yes I love it! One shoe, I'm going to start that.
shadowraven45662 chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
awesome!
Brakenpelt chapter 2 . 4/13/2012
awww, i want to know wat happens. don't abandon this story plz.
MDWOLFGIRL chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Aw i cant wait to see france find him.
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
This will be a fun adventure
weirdgirl13 chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
this. was. AWESOME! :DDD i hope that you add a next chapter soon! and about the grammar... I am a grammar nazi at times, BUT THIS HAD NO MISTAKES! that i could tell anyways xD keep up the good work! :D
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