Reviews for A Friend of the Family
Renae chapter 23 . 5/12
A beautiful story. Thank you
MsLiss chapter 23 . 5/13
Thank you
ChristyWIX chapter 23 . 5/9
Gah, I think I just got a little teary at the end there with the note from Felix. This was one of your better stories. I loved it the whole time. Through and through. I adored how they met on the job site. How much they cared for each other from that meeting. The hot kisses right before he left STL and off to Chicago. How they kept in touch while he was away learning all of his skills. Coming back to care for his mom and that fantastic reunion of her being there for him and his mom. The way she gave him her car and bed, for as long as needed. How they fell in love. Her knowledge of everything and everyone in their business and how much of an asset she was to any company. Meeting Felix and how integral he became. A wonderful Tanya and that was refreshing. The surprise of Carlisle coming around and fixing shit he broke from years of being a dick. I loved the family and the 'family'. The 'family' was highly entertaining. I loved when Sally came to visit Edward personally and how funny he was. The whole part with Maas and what happened and them fleeing to Key West, then Felix and Tanya showing up. The part about Edward using his credit cards was hilarious. I laughed so effing hard at that. Then the sad part, that truly did fit with the story. Unexpected, yet pivotal. Definitely sad. I loved how it was Bella that pulled both herself and Edward up from the ashes and got them back on track again. Brilliant. I got worried the second time Cheney and Weber visited but again, Bella was brilliant. Loved that Felix heard it and thought they handled it wonderfully. I was so happy that everything worked out or, at the very least they seem to have, with Cheney and Weber not coming around anymore. They definitely took things too far. As Jenks mentioned, just because you're friends of the family does not mean you are involved. Very valid point. Through it all, Bella and Edward loved each other fully and completely. I really loved that. Thank you so much for sharing your imagination with us here. ~Christy xo
lola-cullen-salvatore chapter 23 . 11/26/2016
I loved this story
CoppertopJ chapter 3 . 10/22/2016
Carlisle is a dick, phallus, cock, johnson, tool, pecker, schlong, prick, and last but not least, an asshole; which is located in the same vicinity.
CoppertopJ chapter 2 . 10/22/2016
Loving this Bella. Hating this Carlisle, simpering, self-centered ass that he is. :)
Teresa R chapter 23 . 9/15/2016
sequel would be wonderful. Love this story thanks so much. Life is perfectly imperfect just the way it should be.
Teresa R chapter 22 . 9/15/2016
He knew Bella was full of fire he will be lucky to come out of this with both balls lol
Teresa R chapter 21 . 9/12/2016
So happy they put the feds in there place they where being freaky creeps. I am so happy about the baby.
Teresa R chapter 20 . 9/11/2016
I feel so sad for them all there privet times have been not so privet .
Teresa R chapter 19 . 9/7/2016
OMG cried big fat tears. My heart just broke for them. I am so happy they are strong enough to get through it.
Teresa R chapter 18 . 9/7/2016
Glad to Stefano had an accident . Babys all around love it.
Teresa R chapter 17 . 9/6/2016
It is the creepy son of Sally . Bella is pregers :)
Teresa R chapter 16 . 9/6/2016
Love Bella she is right he should know better than to keep something from her.
Teresa R chapter 15 . 9/6/2016
Edward is a smart guy and Fe is impressed :)
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