Reviews for Young Blood |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() *grinning foolishly* |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Friends with Benefits" *cough* |
![]() ![]() ![]() *grinning wickedly* |
![]() ![]() ![]() "embarrassment", oh please *eye roll* I love the awkwardness, you got Katniss's character so beautifully! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story and amazing character development |
![]() ![]() ![]() perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! Just like the book, she he been keeping up with the boy with the bread! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really great story! Fits very well with the in-between period at the end of Mockingjay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What are you doing to me, It's already 11pm and I need to wake up at 5am but I just cant get my eyes close! This story is keeping me awake! It's soooo good that I wanna leave for work tomorrow just to read this! |
![]() ![]() Wow, I've just spent the whole day reading your story and it was exactly what I'd been looking for :) Someone was finally able to keep the characters real, it was really very well written, I enjoyed reading it a lot :))) Have a nice day! |
![]() ![]() A www that was lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was incredible! The character development & insight into Katniss & Peeta's motivations were realistic. The dialogue & evolution of their relationship was lovely. Loved Greasy Sae, Haymitch, & Effie's appearances. I'm considering this story canon because it was such a jump between the "end" of Mockingjay & the epilogue. Looking forward to reading more from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed it BB |
![]() ![]() I really like your series and your writing style (I've read some of your other stories too). You manage to keep the characters, well, in character, which I think is one of the hardest things to do. I like the tempo too. In some stories there's just too many "big things" happening all the time but you remember that the slow, everyday moments can be just as important. I just have one problem specifically with this chapter, possibly some future chapters: Messalla. Messalla is the name of Cressida's male assistant in Collins' books, and he dies in Mockingjay. So either you forgot that he died, and got the gender wrong, or you gave the new assistant the same name. Either way, it's confusing and takes focus away from the story. Otherwise I really enjoy reading your stories, I don't usually comment on stuff! |