Fun story. I enjoyed Harry and Hermione, as well as Sirius and Amelia. Thanks, for a fun read!

I’ll be real, these last two chapters seriously stumbled and took some points off the story to a 7. Keeping in mind that the same HP Death has him greet the Third brother graciously, it’s clear that he doesn’t always go back on his deals or be a monkeys paw like with the other two brothers, putting aside that all 3 of them were still able to make it back from the deal in the first place. It literally just makes Hermione’s sacrifice come off as forced for the sake of consequences or giving her something to do, which could have easily been done without a bargain or without the permanent consequences, what was even the point of all the future talk with politics and jobs if you were just going to undercut it by making it useless? Now I don’t think that some of the badly done endings in shounen are actually that bad despite what people say, but this is somehow worse than those worst endings.

Thank God He Died.

Headbastards Must Die.

PROOFREAD THE FUCKING STORY.

the exposition info dumps suced ass. the dialogue...also kinda sucked ass here.

does he not know his parents' names in this universe?

The ending was terrible

really liked this story! Was hooked from start to finish, even though the ending was abrupt the story was good and I read it all in one sitting.

I like the story alot! Good job!

Thanks for sharing your fantastic story. I enjoyed it very much.

Enjoyed for the most part until end. Death is neither kind nor cruel. But makes all things equal. Death doesn’t lie. Harry was already promised a safe passage, Hermiones bargain was pointless.

love stories with the Grangers. not my favourite ending with Dumbledore i want more yelling at him. HEA

hermiones mom is weird af

How evil is this Dumbledore?