Reviews for Guilt
Scattycow chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
The only way that he could have redeemed his skanky, whoring arse would have been if he had slit his own wrists and joined her.
If it had been anyone else but Victoria, the girl he cheated on Bella with, then he might have been forgiveable, I might have even have had some sympathy for him, but no. He is scum and doesn't deserve to breathe.
snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
Oh, wow... this is so sad...
EconomyofWords chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
What an ass. I hope Victoria cheats on him and he finds out the kid is not his. He doesn't seem like he feels like he did anything too wrong. Too bad Bella killed herself, it would be better if she ended up happy and he was alone.
tainted-tash chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Screw the flames babe. I loved it. Though it made me cry, I'm glad I read it. I think I get her pain, living apart from the one you love us soul destroying.
Vampgirl79 chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Hi again :) Well i read this one a couple of nights ago. Again, sorry I took a bit to review on it. Anyhow, I was checking out your profile one night, seeing which of your awesome fics I wanted to read. I plan to read your others too, KK, Duplicity and Taken soon :) I prob will start with Duplicity first I think. Anyway, this story, the summary grabbed my attention. Though i have a hard time reading angsty, i still do anyway, lol. I am at a loss of words in a away with this one. It was so gut-wrenching from beginning to end. I was in tears at several points, mad at others. Which goes to show what an incredible writer you are! Babe, you seriously should have hundreds and hundreds more reviews, seriously. I have to say and i mean it, you are one of my fav writers ever on ff! Seriously, i love your style and i can tell you just write from your heart, you dont try too hard. I hope you get what I mean. Anyway, this story gutted me. I really, really felt for Bella. I wish she didn't do that to herself. I wish she had talked things out more with Edward, made him listen, pushed him to come back home. So many different things could have happened ;( I cant help it, I didn't want Edward with Vicky, haa. But then again, it would have been a totally different fic. I was very pissed at Edward. Because damn no matter what Bella did, pushing him away, the probs they have; if he really loved her, they could have worked it out. But no, thats most men for you always thinking below, ugh! It was so tragic Bella felt she had no other way out ;( A small part of me felt for Edward because he will have to live with that the rest of his life. Vicky will have to deal with that Edward will always love Bella more. Such a sad story, beautifully written! I am excited to read more of your stuff and i will. Btw, I miss A night to Remember, hee. ttys hun, take care xoxoxo
Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
This is a very touching story. I love how you show Edward's feelings.
twitipat chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Well written, but for him to get his HEA with his whore? Unacceptable. Anyone else would have been fine.
SimplyMatt chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Finally got around to reading this and I was moved, shocked that Bella took her own life and very annoyed that she did it for Edward, but at the same time I see why.

I wanted to shout at Edward for all this but dont really see it as his fault as Bella was so devoured by her loss of him she decided to be forever without him. It's sad that people do this kind of thing but it happens and you have written about a subject I know will touch many people.

Bet your shocked I read this hehe, but I said I will eventually read your fics xxxxxx
earthsista chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
This is truly amazing, hun. 3
oniguts chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
This story has caused me heartache too. However that is what you were going for. So, well done? Honestly it does not seem like Edward is suffering at all, and how can he love Victoria? She made him stay in London, and I have a feeling she wanted him from the beginning. The fights with Riley, her convincing him to stay,she knew he had a girlfriend, and I'm starting to wonder if she might have called Bella or send any photos of herself with it is too much of a coincidence that she just happens to run into Edward in Seatlle. What happened to her job in London? No way would Bella have wanted him happy with the woman he cheated on her with. Have you ever considered doing another chapter where Edward realizes he has been played, I can see him killling Victoria, or himself. Besides he should tell his family that it was his fault he never saw Bella, he was too busy with Victoria. Or hell, I would love to see a vampire Bella come back to haunt him, torture Victoria and his kid, and leave Edward alone,terrrified, and guilty. This is after all the world of twilight.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
So sad and heartbreaking I loved it so good thank you
wally wally woof woof chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
well bloody thanks for that! i sobbed my bloody heart out at the end missy!

really well written and i understand why you're torn about continuing it or not, its bloody marvellous!

clever girl. love ya x
HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
ooh my word hun. This story was so emotional to read. I can see why this was difficult for you to post considering the way it unfolded.

Here's what I think.

Edward was selfish in the fact that he decided to take up with Victoria because he was lonely. I have to say though that as far as some men are concerned any port in a storm will do when they're lonely (I have personal experience in this regard). He showed he had flaws, and that's something that characters should possess. You wrote him in a way that elicited a reaction from readers, and good or bad, that's an achievement in itself.

Not all stories are sweetness and light. Some are dark, disturbing and some are heartbreaking and don't always provide the typical HEA.

Bella internalised all her hurt, suspecting that Edward wasn't being true to her, but instead of putting her foot down and fighting for him, she became depressed and eventually took her own life. I can't imagine what she endured, as when you are in that dark abyss everything seems unsurmountable. It was a shame that Edward didn't sense there was a problem before it was too late, but who is to say if their relationship could have been saved anyway?

Nothing about this story suggests a HEA, but the point of it was to convey angst...and you did that in spades my lovely.

Well done.
beanothercullen chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
This is the first story I've read where Edward ends up with Victoria, and I liked it. I thought you did a really good job on it and you should be proud. Great job, thanks
frostedglaze chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
It is quite angsty, but that is what you were going for. I am upset that Edward ended up with Victoria. She is after all the reason he did not go back to Bella. Honestly I would have respected Edward, if he came clean to his family, about him fucking Victoria, while Bella was depressed and said he would do anything for her, (except go home, or be faithful), and in the end Victoria got what she wanted...Edward; she did after all encourage him to stay with her and banged him even though he was in a relationship. I do in a twisted way, wish that he would also have commited suicide. He does not deserve to be happy. That being said, well done on both the way you wrote this and being able to elicit strong emotions. I am sure readers will go ballistic over this. Don't worry about the flamers; be proud of the reactions you cause. Would it be too much to ask for a follow up one-shot? Who knows, maybe Victoria will get the karma she deserves...a gruesome death, the homewrecker.
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