|Reviews for Gold, Gum, Fire, and Blood|
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
This was awesome, but there is one thing I suggest and that is the fact of Skyla seeming a bit to Mary Sue-ish. Other readers/authors tend to roll their eyes or complain about this, so that is all I suggest. Sorry if this seems offensive, but other than that I liked the story :)
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/25/2013
Dude it says its about marcelee but its not
| ObsessedOmi-chan chapter 9 . 4/30/2012
This is pretty cool.
| Fioleefan chapter 8 . 4/29/2012
Yay! You followed my advice.
This was really cool.
| dickory5 chapter 3 . 4/26/2012
| Fioleefan-too lazy to log in chapter 7 . 4/24/2012
This is a good story. The reason I think you dont get all the reviews you deserve is because its rated M.
1. The majority of people searching dont leave the K-T range.
2. The ones who look for Ms are usually interested in Lemons and stuff.
I actually think you can slap a T on this and get away with it. This story isnt crude and alot of the stuff dealing w/ here most teenagers already know. Just my opinion.
Anyways, nice chapter. Skye's parents suck. Update soon.
| Fioleefan chapter 4 . 4/19/2012
This was cool. Short... but cool.
I love Skyler. LOVE. He's funny, sounds cute, cool and awesome.
Skyla sounds like she likes Marshy :D
Oooohh Fi you gotta watch out!
And Finn... oh Finn... So innocent. Makes me want to corrupt him :x
Lol. Long review... srry for ranting. Keep up the good work (y) Update soon and all that greatnes.
| Fioleefan chapter 3 . 4/18/2012
This is soooo cool. I'm jealous!
I love your OC's... awesomeness.
And I like the whole randome pirings thing you got here. Kudos.
Well, here's hoping you update soon :D