Reviews for Warrior of the Omnitrix X: Alien Force
sonshinzo chapter 5 . 2/6
That was a good chapter but you can do better because you are a good at writer story
Cerulean Knight chapter 5 . 2/5
Does Naruto/Ben have the potential to learn magic- also recognised as chakra, chi and a few others-?
animenaruto46 chapter 4 . 12/16/2014
Wow didint see that coming the kiss and all finally though there are togather
Adjuster chapter 4 . 12/4/2014
Ok so this story is very good some grammar mistakes but nothing to bad also wouldn't it be easier to finish warrior of the Omnitrix first then work on this so anyone who is following both of these stories won't get some major spoiler
Cerulean Knight chapter 4 . 12/4/2014
Inferno is heatblast right?
Cerulean Knight chapter 3 . 12/4/2014
Oh boy. You mess with family and you get fucked up. No exceptions. None.
ShepardisaBOSS chapter 4 . 12/4/2014
No forgiving Kevin, huh?
Cerulean Knight chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
So does this have any relevance to what's going on in the other WOTO story?
DragonPony022 chapter 3 . 12/3/2014
Well this is interesting. It is alittle sad knowing that the prequel story to this that we wont see any relationship between 'Ben' and Gwen in it. I was hoping they wouldn't have to wait all these years. But now we know the closest they get is a almost kiss. I think Kevin has the wrong idea thinking he is going back to the Null Void no when 'Ben' runs into him this time he will put him down. It is one thing to hurt him but another to hurt the ones he love. That is unless Gwen stops him from doing it. I wonder what 'Ben' will do once he and Gwen finds out what she really is. It is nice to see this 'Ben' isn't a cocky asshole like the canon one is, I think he can have a real relationship without it being all about him. Like how he catches her tennis matches and is supportive of him. I hope Gwen changes to her outfit from the alternate universe that he Ben went to in Ben10

Anyway interesting story seeing the time jump from the other story
BoomOnGames chapter 3 . 10/27/2014
Good story really looking forward to future chapters and seeing how the story unfolds from here
uzuuchi007 chapter 3 . 9/16/2014
Nice !
Guest chapter 3 . 9/3/2014
I would like to think naruto will give Kevin a beat down even fueled by rage Kevin will still can put up a good fight then again I could be wrong
Rexfan1333 chapter 3 . 9/3/2014
This is pretty Interesting. Also, who are going to be in Ben or Naruto's harem? I know that Gwen is in it, but who else?

Are Naruto girls going to be involved as well or not? Looking forward for the next chapter.
animenaruto46 chapter 2 . 8/28/2014
When will the naruto x Gwen moments start to show
Hanmac chapter 2 . 8/27/2014
its tagged has Harem, what other girls do you want to add? Charmchaster and maybe Lucy?
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