|Reviews for Naruto X: Alien Force|
| Have a Little Feith chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Disregard my review on the last chapter of the story prior to this one. I see why the sequel is up now.
| TheBlakkat09 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Hope you'll update soon,this is really stating to get good
| TheBlakkat09 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
update this soon ok? Its geting good.
| Black Ace 0 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
intreastig so far, i'll comment more later.
| The Red Star chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Well, that was interesting. I like the thinly veiled animosity between Naruto and Kevin. Personally, I wouldn't mind if Kevin got killed off. I have a serious dislike of the character. As you said, actions have consequences. I just don't like that he tried to kill the Tennysons multiple times and they don't even seem to be bothered by that in the canon. Evil or redeemed, I say evil. He was better as an antagonist, in my opinion.
Regarding the errors, there were very few, and they didn't strike me as very significant. All in all, it's a good start to what I expect will be an amazing story. I must ask, though, will Naruto ever return to his real persona?
Forever in the Sky,
The Red Star
| Harem Lover 26 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
I thing that Kevin should remain evil. He was the prefect villan for Ben. When Ben was trying to help others Kevin could only harm people for his own gain. When Ben had only one main power at a time Kevin had many powers but were weaker. Also Kevin had all of Bens bad traits and none of his good ones.
In other worlds he was the grates anit-ben villan in the whole show, doing a much better job at it than Albedo who was just an alien traped in Bens body. The only reson that Kevin became good was so that Gwen would have a boyfriend thats not Ben. If you need some one to drive them around I reckoment Elena from the Alien Swam movie she a grate bad girl gone good
| animekingmike chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
The chapter was really good. You have definitely shown some major writing improvement between this and your original stories. I'll be looking forward to see where the story will begin to deviate and how you will manage to keep the events of the story happening the way they do with just 2 people on the team and not a trio. Charmcaster's and Hex's global conquest plans couldn't have been stopped without Kevin on the team to help. And then we have the thing with Aggregor. All my opinion. In any case, keep it up.
| SunpouMasuraoZ chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
I liked the interactions with Naruto/Ben and Gwen. They have that chemistry now, and seem to be more comfortable with their new relationship. I think that Naruto should be confident in his abilities, but still realize that all it takes is one mistake and it could cost him in battle. The Ben from canon is too cocky and arrogant now for my liking.
Kevin should stay a villain in your story. I couldn't really see him as the hero type while watching Alien Force, and I was waiting for the classic double cross to happen leaving Ben and Gwen high and dry in a impossibly dangerous situation with no room for error.
Turbine and Frightwig would be good replacements for Kevin on the team. You could have it that just before he went missing, Max helped train the both of them to become fully deputized Plumbers, and received a similar message from Max to meet up with Gwen and Ben.
It would be funny in a future chapter if you could have Naruto doing battle with a Male alien like an Appoplexian or a Vaxasaurian, and then have him perform his infamous 'Sexy no Jutsu' on them but finds out that it also causes Kevin to pass out from blood loss. (Kevin was in the Null void for some time, chances are he ran across several female alien species while in his hybrid form.) XD
Looking forward to reading your next update.