Reviews for Built to Collapse
xxkoffeexx chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
I love the tension between these two and I love the way you wrote them.
cerberus angel chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Oh wow... I don't know what to say other than I love this piece and yet that statement still doesn't do this piece justice. I'm definitely adding this to my favorites. :) Hope you write another BalthierxPenelo one-shot.
Darknessdawns chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
This story reminded me of a cat and mouse chase. I greatly enjoyed it and found it very well written.
xoVanilla-Bean chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
GOD. SO GOOD. I love this.

I love this in a way that makes me feel inept at writing all things FFXII. In a good way. To be sure. And thanks for making me suddenly like Balthier/Penelo. A lot.

Can you maybe write forever?
The Red Courage chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
I really liked the voice in this!
always-kh chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
I liked the piece even though i don't know the fandom well i thought the emotions and conflict came across well and it was well done and pretty believable though occasionally the dialogue had me wondering if people are likely to actually admit some of these things and not just lie or keep it to themselves. but again i don't know the characters i'm just thinking rl.

also i'm nosy so i was kinda wondering at your a/n and which character you identify with or identify your (ex?)bf/gf with.