|Reviews for Hematite|
| Ksuhi chapter 30 . 5/28
Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story.
The emotions it evokes are so strong that I had to read it through twice to be able say anything coherent. I absolutely adore your characterizations for all the Uchihas. It's amazing to me how much affection for them you created. I cried like a baby over Setsuna.
I think that Sasuke is your masterpiece though. You absolutely captured his character in such a unique way. His devotion to Madara here is such a fascinating mirror to his devotion to Itachi in canon. Sasuke is such an interestingly broken character, the way he throws his everything into his one most precious person and you really captured that.
Everything in this story was flawlessly executed and on the reread, so much of it stood out as absolute poetry. The reoccurring chess metaphor and the foreshadowing with the sword art at the end were beautifully written. As much as it pained me, the ambiguity of your epilogue was perfect and I probably read it six times, combing for clues. You were right that reading it in one go was crippling. And I did it twice. I guess I'm a bit of a masochist too.
On another note, I wanted to tell you that I'm sorry you got flamed so hard over your authors notes during this story. I've done a fair amount of writing myself and understand how much effort, time, and emotion goes into writing and finishing something like this. You have my utmost respect and admiration. I hope you continue to write and that I have the privilege to read what you do write.
| KnowingNoMore chapter 4 . 9/30/2016
Like this chapter very much. Madara being relatable and upset Sasuke. Loving it!
| Scarlett Skylar chapter 4 . 3/18/2016
| Ita-pon chapter 2 . 3/16/2016
Ita-pon believes that Naruto would indeed make a cute cat, although he is a little sad it involved pain for the tot - though at least it will pass!
Ita-pon is very sad about Izunas death, and very pleased the bad man was punished at the end of the chapter... He also thinks sasuke is a very cute babe.
And with that, we shall gallop away to review another day! xxx
| Ita-pon chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
Ita-pon has a message about this fix; neigh neigh neiiiiiigh, ne-neiiiggh.
Roughly translated, this means he thinks you do not have enough reviews for this amazing work, and he's going to correct that
With much love, we will now trot on to the next chapter xxx
| JKR chapter 30 . 3/4/2016
So, I read it all tonight, as I promised and - that was a LOT of emotion... Really, its epic, its ginormously hugely epic..! Its amazing how different things twisted so tightly and I have a guess who he chose, but not gonna tell you yet truly, this was a magnificent, disastrous (story) epic, tragic, glorious fic and... My love for it is only dwarfed by my love for you.
| LoveCritic chapter 22 . 1/10/2016
I feel like I am going to hate the ending with a passion I am so afraid the only one that is going to be left living is Sasuke and this story is bringing out all sorts of emotions. The biggest conflict I have is with Sasukes personality how I love/hate him. Every chapter I finish I dread being a step closer to the end as I don't want it to be a depressing ending.
| Guest chapter 30 . 10/14/2015
I started this like 2 days ago and it has wrecked me honestly. It started with me cheering on sassy sasuke it got deep and I think you did really good with not getting too ooc while still keeping them in such a different mindset and backround. Honestly it was great and I'll probably go read more of your stories now but I get at the end how it was probably intentionally supposed to not name who Madara ended up with but the part where itachi says he's going to meet up with Sasuke confused me a bit because I thought that itachi and his mother had been looking over whoever Madara chose and Madara himself and I wasn't sure if that was hinting that it was Izuna or if I simply just got confused still over all this was a great read
| Ireadnonstop chapter 30 . 8/22/2015
Hello, this is my first time writing a review to this story although I have long finished reading this story about a month ago.
I have come to a relisation that I'm...a bit obsessed over this story. From the first time I finished reading the last chapter till today, I have re-read this story multiple times; memorising to heart the feels of my favourite moments, being angsty together with Madara and Sasuke while they go through hardships. I was reading all the while being angry at Madara for not listening to Sasuke more, and at Sasuke for being so incredibly foolish. Their love was a love that spanned wide and violent, and I loved, loved, loved, that you portray their love as so, since it is exactly how I imagine their love to be. Yet, their love is sweet.
The ending is brilliant.
This is an excellent story, and I cannot thank you enough for writing this. We need more MadaSasu in the fandom (it is my favourite pairing after ItaSasu), and I am so glad for this.
| azxrae chapter 19 . 7/23/2015
| azxrae chapter 18 . 7/23/2015
just sit right back and you'll hear a tale a tale of t-man's cock
| azxrae chapter 16 . 7/23/2015
penis cock equal pocky
| Winged Lady Colette chapter 10 . 6/2/2015
I love it. :D
| Lily Short Stuff Uchiha chapter 30 . 5/12/2015
I was going to make up some bullshit excuse about how I recently joined a new fandom (figured out my OTP) and how it is taking up all my free time. While that is (mostly) true... the other part is that I straight up forgot.
It upsets me that Sasuke expected Madara to tell him that he never truly loved Sasuke. Maybe because I expect that in my own life? Is that too personal? I tend to share more than I expect to here.
"Sweet Child," Madara murmured, his voice coming out strong with sheer determination, "It could not have been anyone else."
HOW FUCKING DARE YOU! YOU REALLY KILLED SASUKE FIRST. I... THIS IS WHY I AM 'MAKING THIS FUCKING FACE AT YOUR STORY'!
I was going to read and review the Epilogue but I am so upset that I can't.
| UniversalPetto chapter 30 . 4/14/2015
Damn it T.T I'm crying like a baby :') Beautiful story, dear... Sad but beautiful.. Excuse me now, I have to read that last chapter one more time