Reviews for Everything and Nothing
Puggle chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Thank you for sharing
Doni chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I like very much that they both chose everything. Very nicely done.
VampChick76 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
That was hot. Wow.

Ishtar205 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
My heart beats at the rythm of your words
Dannie Tomlinson chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Yay smut! Loved this.
LPLB chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
I love the style you used for this. The absolutes and descriptive words and short sentences evoke the urgency of the situation. When you changed the point of view to John and Sherlock and we got to see inside their heads, it was brilliant. It was Everything good.
yamineko87 chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
awwww... cute ending. as for the rest? cold shower time
NTK000 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I have to say that this was the hottest thing I've read in a long time. Even though I usually can't enjoy stories with a different top/bodom constellation than the one I prefer, it didn't even bother me here. Probably because you perfectly discribed the heat and everything. I really got lost with em 3 Aww.

Thanks! :)
ongreenergrasses chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I was reading this because right now, I'm a horny bastard, and the idea of smut was greeted by a rather loud "OH GOD YES" from my traitorous brain...

...and I was like "whoa, okay, melting from heat here." Seriously. It's better than regular porn :D But then again, everything you write is better than "regular" stuff. But yeah, I kept going. And then I saw this line...

'"Come on." he pleaded. "Please." he begged'...

...and the first thing that came into my mind was "I've never begged for mercy in my life."
Xivida chapter 1 . 4/14/2012


I love it.

Don't worry, it's not as smutty as most M-rated fics.

My favorite bit is how you managed to portray the overwhelming lust and emotions they were both experiencing until they nearly consummated, where it came to a bit of a screeching halt, but that was beautiful too, the fluffy part where they choose each other.
twice the rogue chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
meredithriddle chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
emmish chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
I liked it, you did well :D It's erotic but poetic as well :P

I agree with the soundtrack by the way XD I personally like to listen to On a Slow Night by Metric when I'm writing sexytimes XD


Sherlockian chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Best one I have ever read for any series/fandom. I can't believe you don't write them more. By far the best if ever seen. So beautiful and perfect in every way. Come back with more!
Pandora's tears chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
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