|Reviews for Deeds and Consequences|
| SGreenD chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
It's an obvious line of thought that Nicholas could be haunted by all the dead bodies he saw when he landed in that... pit, and that he caused some of those murders might haunt him even more, so I'm glad you decided to tackle that idea and make a story out of it! And, for the record, I don't think it's messy at all. Just seems like Nicholas had a little PTSD from seeing this horrible thing, and that he got over it, and of course Danny is always there to support him :)
That's the way it's supposed to be I liked it very much, so thanx.
| RuinNine chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Awesome! Absolutely awesome! It was really creepy and I thought for a moment that he'd kill himself, but I'm really glad he didn't. ;] Sucker for happy endings, here. x)
Thank you very much for sharing!
| PeggsterLover chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
This was absolutely incredible! I don't know why you were worried about the ending, cos that was perfect. Nicholas returning to where it happened would certainly have been hard but it helped!
You have once again blown me away, m'dear! What a wonderful story! xD