Reviews for Mes Amies
Theodore Hawkwood chapter 1 . 8/9
Nicely written little bit of poetry that I enjoyed reading.

One minor SPaG mistake was you misspelled focused as focussed in the fifth stanza. But that's the only mistake I've seen.

Everything else was great. Some nice imagery. I've always figured that Manon and Jimmy had a thing for each other and your poem does a nice job of exploring all that.

It may have inspired a plot bunny or two for me, so thanks for that.


Theodore Hawkwood
xXxFrostBitexXx chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
This was a really good poem, I loved it. It made me read it over and over again, keep on writing!