|Reviews for A promise of betrayal|
| HimeFlye chapter 1 . 3/1
oh this is lovely! I love it. It's very short and sweet.
| LadySurvivor chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Okay, this is an awesome chapter. Your insight into Kelsier's head is perfect, completely what I would imagine from him. Gah! It made me cry! And also, it was really well written for english not being your native language. Brilliant job!