|Reviews for How to Leave Footsteps on The Sand|
| Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Good Chapter & More Please
| LittleCreatureFear chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Hey, don't get discouraged. You write what you want to write, and try your best not to mind the flames or lack thereof. You're here to improve, and to share what's on your mind. Focus on the positive and you'll do fine.
And as for the story, I absolutely LOVE it. I'm not one for reviewing, but this is just wonderful. I love how detailed you write, and I really do hope you continue this story.
Update soon! :)
| MaybeWolf chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
This was cool, I think your writing is deserving of more attention.
Maybe more people would review if you added some flashback type scenes where to give some background on moments leading up to this. You could even frame those moments in How I Met Your Mother-esque ways, with Robbie and Jade telling their kids about different moments at HA and after. Maybe there are reasons behind Robbie and Jade's children's names which have stories?
Idk, just throwing things out there :)
| anon.10810 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Great chapter, looks to be a very interesting story...
Hope you decide to continue with it...