|Reviews for All For One Child|
| Taeniaea chapter 15 . 2/15
| sherryE chapter 15 . 2/13
Awesome chapter. Nice writing job. Love it. Very captivating. I want more :-D
| via-go chapter 14 . 2/9
I can't believe I missed this update! I like the cryptic conversation. You certainly have me on the edge of my seat. Keep it coming!
| sherryE chapter 14 . 2/2
Good chapter. Very mysterious. Intriguing. And, Oh, ha ha nice little cliffhanger there
| RheasHelm chapter 14 . 2/1
Very mysterious, and very cool. Let's see where this is going.
Superb writing, this is a pleasure to read.
But what is it with all these people calling a female Shepard the "father" of Liara's children? As a species that has only one sex, the Asari should not have a word for "father".
I also have to wonder how any genetic material of Shepard's, any of her Cerberus tech, could possibly have made it into Liara's child. That goes against how Asari reproduction is supposed to work. Did the Greys experiment on the fetus?
| sherryE chapter 13 . 1/27
Wow awesome story. Awesome. Taris wants to play nice now? Now that Aedri is hurt? Wow.
| Julius Night chapter 12 . 1/26
This fic is truly an amazing read! I knew I would favorite only a few paragraphs into chapter one as well. Your style is very creative, interesting and very true to form in the Mass Effect universe. Not one detail is out of place and yet it stays fresh and innovative with each chapter. Purely wonderful work and I look forward to every update!
| lynettecullen chapter 1 . 1/25
This is interesting as hell.
| sherryE chapter 12 . 1/23
WooHoo great tension, intriguing, ok you have me on the edge of my seat. :-D Well done. I want more.
| via-go chapter 11 . 1/18
Oh sweet memories. I really enjoyed this chapter. You always do a good job of writing Shepard as a parent. Though I'm looking forward to the action, I still love little moments like this. Great job. :)
| sherryE chapter 11 . 1/12
I'm so looking forward to more. Great chapter. This is a wonderful story. Keep up the good work. It's awesome.
| via-go chapter 10 . 1/9
Great stuff. It's very impressive that you've been able to do so much with original characters. There's just enough familiarity to hook the reader, but at the same time we're getting to know these new people. It's very intriguing, and I had to pace myself so I didn't read the whole thing in one sitting. I can't wait to read more.
| sherryE chapter 10 . 1/5
Good chapter. Keep it coming. Looking forward to more.
| Bill Gopher chapter 5 . 1/5
Okay, I have stopped reading at the top of chapter 5 just so I could say how much I'm enjoying this and especially Wrex at the end of chapter 4.
| sherryE chapter 9 . 12/29/2013
This is an awesome story. I went back and reread it to refresh my memory. I am so looking forward to more