Reviews for Of Sheep and Battle Chicken
StabKingPro chapter 55 . 10/7
Nice use of miracleofsound at the end
Guest chapter 24 . 10/3
Kudos to you for the Pulp Fiction reference.
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 1 . 9/23
Typoexists only only only on"
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 122 . 9/23
"treasure drove" - "treasure trove"

"sensation of she always" - "sensation she always"

"facing two the galaxy's" - "facing two of the galaxy's"
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 121 . 9/23
"valance levels" - "valence levels
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 120 . 9/23
"love of me for the love" - "love of me or the love"
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 119 . 9/23
"when we will we" - "when will we"
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 118 . 9/23
"even close of enough of us" - "even close to enough of us" or "aren't enough of us"

"Presidium open, so let in" - "Presidium open to let in"

"grand sire though" - "grand sire thought"
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 117 . 9/23
"he dashed back" - "she dashed back"
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 114 . 9/23
This is the absolute best prologue to a fight I have ever read in my life. I have gone through a lot of mass effect novelisations and I can clearly say that this is one of the best I have ever read in my life. Absolutely FUCKING AWESOME! See ya at the end, slick! ;)
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 110 . 9/23
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 105 . 9/23
"compare me tot that" - "compare me to that"
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 104 . 9/23
"sigh of more asari" - "sight of more asari"
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 102 . 9/23
"missiles as the rachni" - "missiles at the rachni"

The fight was excellent. I agree with your assessment of the fight with Saren.

The part I loved the most was the end with the rachni. It was too damn beautiful and too sad. Now, that's something that all of us ME guys would have loved to see in the game. I'm telling you, this is the kind of stuff I love to play, read or see. And you're hitting all the right notes.
Skadarken-Weiz chapter 101 . 9/23
"blast a whole" - "blast a hole"
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