|Reviews for Ethereal|
| the Moon our Witness chapter 14 . 6/11
Just wow. Such a great story and I only read it now. It has everything I could ask for. Also, it's the first time I read a "shorter" Story with such a awesome and detailed plot. I love the quotes you put at the beginning of every chapter and the way you made Katara talk in the common language. You truly are an inspiration.
Keep up the good work, I hope you will update polar nights soon again.
| the Moon our Witness chapter 5 . 6/11
Woah Woah Woah. What? I did not ever expect for Ozai to die, just like this. This really surprised me, which is a good thing since that rarely ever happens.
| The King in White chapter 14 . 6/8
Interesting in concept, but I felt like it was too short. You kind of had us set up for a journey to the ocean, and then just ended it in the space of a few chapters. Almost like you just decided to rush to the end of it. I felt like there were a lot of unanswered questions as well.
| InItToWinIT chapter 14 . 5/16
So I just found this - I thought I had read it before but realized I had not - and wow! You really are a very talented writer. This was a very beautiful story despite its brevity, and I really liked how you worked with the theme. I did think the action scene and following few scenes were a little rushed or anticlimactic but the majority of the story was very well-done.
You know, I never figured out whether Katara's top half was naked after transforming back into her siren form? Thank you so much for your amazing stories! Now please update Polar Nights ASAP!
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/22/2014
I loved your fanfict! It was so different from the usual story lines and I especially like a story based on fantasy and mythical creatures :)
Keep up the great work :)
| BlueStar Sapphire - ProtoZero chapter 14 . 12/14/2013
The story started out ok then it felt like you rushed it or something at the end, though you did confused me with calling Katara a siren when its a bird women much like a harpy but beautiful with a lovely singing voice. This creation book did you make it up or was it an actual book?
| Korrabella chapter 14 . 12/1/2013
| Ruby of Raven chapter 14 . 8/6/2013
Yes! I'm going to go read polar night now! XD I loved this story! Great job! I want more!
| PearLynn chapter 14 . 7/7/2013
I thought of Pirates of the Caribbean when this started. This was such a good read!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Holy cow, first chapter and I'm already completely enthralled!
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/25/2012
You need to write a sequel! I loved this story! C:
| Velvet of Love chapter 9 . 11/4/2012
Don't laugh when I ask this...
Did Katara eat the man or suck his blood...? -_-
| CultOfStrawberry chapter 14 . 10/18/2012
Such a beautiful story.
| JoPoGirlsKickAss chapter 14 . 10/9/2012
Awesome story! A great twist to the usual Zutara.
| Fatecaster chapter 14 . 8/21/2012
I love the mythological references you added to their story and how you wound those references around parts of the original cartoon and turned it into an incredible mix of stories.