|Reviews for Hogyoku|
| Dark spirits chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Nice first chapter, it really got me interested, does naruto know the shinigamis hoho zenjutsu and magic...
does he have a hollow side as well
| JAKdaRIPPER chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Iron fist kinda sounds stupid, i like everything else about the story though
| ddcj1990 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Awesome great first chapter I really hope you update this story soon
| Wolvenstrom chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Nice of you to keep Sarutobi so level. I would have wrote something simple like
"Get the f*&k out of my office you evil bitch." evenly.
Glad to see you had more class.
| Psudocode Samurai chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
this one should prove interesting, so Naruto's chakra was destroyed by the shinigami on accident, then he changed from wanting to be a god to something else...though for Aizen the stone failed him when he lost his ambition, so I'm curious as to what he wants now that would have the stone stay with him...
Keep up the good work man, I look forward to seeing more.
| Dragonblaze66 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
great first chap!
| Invictus chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
there should be no other pairing of girls from the naruto anime,only bleach girls..what exactly are naruto's powers?as god can he utilize chakra based tech?his eventual goal should be world domination,not a single village..is naruto's zanpakuto spirit the kyuubi or te hyogoku?what about the kyuubi sealed in him?
eagerly awaitin ur update..
| BlackSkullDragon chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
| Darth Xion chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
i hope to see a flashback or skill set of naruto & powers he as a god can use..
the village name ironfist is an odd one,pls rename it..
& the conflict in the west spilling into east which country is it?is it the water country?i hope naruto doesnt forgive konaha or his mother, and make his goal world domination after all he is a god,why limit him to a village?
i also should feel that there should be no konaha girls/incest in his harem,also naruto should be more badass & confident,dark..
pls update soon..
| Killjoy3000 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
this is an awesome fic
| LimaSCP chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
good fic so far
| lexum09 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
nice story, the plot has been used but the authors never continue the story, a few short chapters and that's all, only the forsaken and the fic is old, it has happened a lot of development in Naruto and Bleach mangas, more characters, abilities and powers. For the pairing, more used than Naru-Hina cant be possible. Good job and i hope that you continue this fic
| inuboy86 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Now this story has potential, please continue and update again soon.
| karthik9 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates