|Reviews for Hogyoku|
| Z-Breezy chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
I think this is your best start off to a story,I'll be glad when he leaves besides that,could offer gaara a position in his force ?
| alchemists19 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
| King-konoha chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
wow. its one of the best story i read. i think you may add kasumi or kushina to the harem. update soon.
| Angeldoctor chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
I love ur story! I'm already salivating at the idea of chapter 2. Hope the next chapter comes out soon and the same length as the first too. I like long chapters cause it means more to read. Lol. I can't wait for inevitable clash between Naruto and basically... everyone! Lol!
| River with an A chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Hoho I like it.
I hope your not thinking of forgiving kushina. That bitch abandon.
| znta chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
more more more
| senjuuchiha chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
wow bro this great i love it i love it a lot man you have to continue with the book man this one shows so much promise i love your work you are doin a fantastic job bro as advice let naruto become the strongest as protcetor or defender like when the invason comes let naruto saves everyones and let the suffer for all what they did to him and his clan like when he forgives them he will for get about them he did it for the next generations the ones who loves him he only saves them from destrution because of the youger generation the older ones will forever be nothin to him while the next will be somethin for him as his true family there is my advice and because i love this book so much i will reveiew it everyday so you will get some tips and ideas in case you get wtiter brother sho
| SilverKnight17 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
this is getting good, keep up the good work
| Patriot-112 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Man, I hat stories like this. But I hope Kushina realizes her mistake real soon, or else...
| tstoldt chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Please don't let rukia be with naruto she's aweful she's like a little girl its like ichigo getting it on with his sister their ugly other than that its fine update again soon
| Dante chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
I liked it alot and hope you update soon.
| Grokon12 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
I'ts a very interesting start, can't wait to read more. I love it. Is his Zanpaktou from the ones already made or created?
| BITCHES chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
great story cant wait to read more
| lava213 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Hey man great chapter I can't wait to read more soon
Have a good day
| ryanshadow19 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
I enjoyed the chapter specifically the plot and length of it please keep up the good work