Reviews for Hogyoku
Murphy laws 666 chapter 4 . 10/25/2015
Orochi-theme does make mayuri look like a saint! Good job on the story though I would give the characters you interduce more character development
Uchiha Senju Naruto chapter 4 . 9/25/2015
Lancelot Seiten 1 chapter 4 . 9/9/2015
Is this sotry abandoned?

LS 1
Ciarle chapter 4 . 7/1/2015
love the storyline hoping for more
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
PGBandit chapter 1 . 5/24/2015

The initail idea of becoming a god(kami) was good and interesting, moving away from that diminshes your story.
Some characterisations are good but its like your copying in bleach characters for no purpose. Having the cast be all female for his harem to continue his bloodline would make more sense.

This a good idea with a rough transistion, like why Naruto doesnt just leave earlier, focus on business, use the Namikaze name and dis-inheiret The Uzumaki's. Why doesnt naruto go west or to minor nations like wave, snow, vegtables, star to establish his base as a god. I can understand why this was abandoned due to there being no purpose of vision in the story. It could of been unique with some editing!

Ja ne
rougeshadow chapter 4 . 5/7/2015
Village hidden in death
Dark Angel Assassin's chapter 4 . 4/5/2015
I've read a lot of ur work and so far this is my favorite please up date ur an amazing writer
Unknown Eldritch chapter 4 . 3/12/2015
I think Shinigakure, despite it's clicheness (to the max!) sounds the best. Also, please update! This story is badass!
Dante Redgrave chapter 4 . 11/20/2014
Jreaps24, what type of zanpakuto is Naruto going to use to fight with when the time comes for him to show his former clan the power he has under his control?
XicorE03 chapter 4 . 11/7/2014
Very nice bro I'm liking the story so far, hope to see more of it soon.
Kai chapter 4 . 10/22/2014
update! I wanna see kushina get wrecked
Kaiju Rinnegan chapter 4 . 10/14/2014
Could Tia, from Bleach, and Fu, from Naruto, be in Naruto's harem please?
gunruner420 chapter 4 . 10/13/2014
Kabuto should be experimented on like what he did to others
x chapter 4 . 8/7/2014
Rose has purple eyes, long, wavy, blond hair and a perpetually bored expression. Rose wears a black suit with a thigh-length, black jacket. He also wears a white frilled shirt with frilled cuffs (or large cuffs) and high collar, which he commonly keeps untucked. During his initial time as captain, he kept his hair somewhat straighter with a small black ribbon tied near the end. He wore the standard Shinigami robes and a sleeveless captain's haori, but with a frilled collared shirt under it.

Seventeen months after Aizen's defeat, Rose returns to his original Shinigami attire with shorter, slicked-back hair with the addition of a single lock falling into his face.[2]


A seemingly foppish man with a disinterested air, Rose is one of the more laid-back members of the Visored. He is frequently seen tuning his guitar and chatting with Love rather than paying attention to what is going on around him. He's interested in music and often discusses whatever singles that have recently come out, such as the then-latest Prince of Darkness album.[3] He also enjoys reading manga, a pastime shared with Love and Lisa, although he becomes irritated if anyone spoils it for him.[4]

Despite the disinterested behavior he exhibits, he seems to care for his fellow Visored; he smiles happily when he realizes that Hachi is happy to have met Orihime, due to the notable similarities regarding their healing abilities. He also states that "the family is growing", due to Ichigo and Orihime coming to stay with them, even claiming that the aforementioned humans' partner/counterpart, Hiyori and Hachi, were similarly happy. Rose seems to pay close attention to dramatic effect while in battle, as seen with his starting a speech on the Human nature to band together against a common enemy and his attempt to dramatically rise from the rubble of a building he was hurled into, leading to an unimpressed Love smacking him in response at both occasions.
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