Reviews for If I Walk Away
Anna chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
xfmoon chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Fantastic tag! I would have loved to see something like this on the show. As others have said the last line was great. Kudos to you :)
The Flaming Dragonfly chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
This is very nice. Anything longer probably wouldn't have worked as well. And I love the last line.
liten-sam chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
This was lovely, thanks for writing it
Wldwmn chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Truly excellent vignette. For a short piece the writing was very descriptive and definitely 'put me in' the scene. Subtle emotional content and very IC for both Jane and Lisbon. Well done! :)
Lothiriel84 chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
I simply loved this tag - every part of it!

I'm actually going to nominate it for the Paint It Red Awards (on the Paint It Red forum), I hope you don't mind...

Thanks for writing it!
nic73 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
A great job, authors have done a really good job with that 5 second moment.
jisbon fan chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
i am absolutely in love with this. it would have been fabulous to have seen this on air.
AlwayzOlicity chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
I would have loved to see job. Loved it!
Donnamour1969 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
That last line made the tag. Well done.
LAurore chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Nice done :)

Just, I think the end is a little too abrupt...