Reviews for White Owl
anthony.pengelly.10 chapter 23 . 11/15/2014
good hope for more
Alex2909 chapter 23 . 11/15/2014
glad rogue and rose are going to the next level of their relationship. on a side note im glad jean dumped duncan, always thought he was a twat
Mystery Melmoth chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
there was a part in this chapter where the phrase "something went well with something" was used way too often. That gave my horrible, horrible Twilight PTSD.

Rest is good though
TheFoolishDreamer chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Great as always :D
gaara king of the sand chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Lemon or no Lemon i don't mind as long as you update anyways great chapter till next message bye
xDarklightx chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
I like it.
dogman999 chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Love the chapter keep up the good work.
Morbious20 chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Good chapter
Zikarn Krais chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Meh, I think honestly too many authors focus too heavily on the lemons.

Seriously, it's hard enough putting in the feels in normal environments, let alone writing them into a bodice ripper.

If you feel you can't, just don't put them in, I doubt many would complain TOO much about it.
shugokage chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Interesting chapter thanks!
WhiteElfElder chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Nice...and I like it that you alluded to but did not finish the scene as it leaves the imagination working.
fullmetalalchemist26 chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Woot looks good! Tho personally, I think the corset idea was better than the dress.. Meh depends on ones likes I guess. The corset theme also would have gone with Rogue's 'goth/dark' theme quite well in comparison to the dress. Just my opinion anyways heh.
goddragonking chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)
kapuis chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Good chapter.
I look forward to see Rogue's reaction when Rose will asked her to move with her.
marlastiano chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Thanks :)
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