Reviews for White Owl
hellz swordsman chapter 24 . 3/16
Love the story wish for more.
FelixtheSax chapter 24 . 2/3
I hate fucking cliffhangers. And you're so good at them! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Lol.
125b chapter 24 . 1/29
Fun story
sm7772008 chapter 24 . 1/9
Please update as soon as you can.
sm7772008 chapter 23 . 1/9
Awesome story. Please update as soon as you can.
SonOfNenji chapter 24 . 1/1
Can you please cut down on the physical affection a little?

I know this is romance, but what would be the point if there was no plot?

The last couple of chapters kind of detracted from your perfect record. I just think you overdid it a little bit.


SonOfNenji chapter 23 . 1/1
Common... move the plot along already! T_T

We want moar Mystique shenanigans!

Also, how would the bond work between two women, anyway? Is it symbolic? Or do they use their fingers and... ya know. -;;

Looking forward to more world-building between Magic and Mutation! (and was it intentional that Rose is technically a magical mutant?... Unless Spider-Man doesn't count either, of course).

SonOfNenji chapter 22 . 1/1
Mystique was hilarious this chapter.

I'd like to read about the aftermath of those lessons...

Plus, her maternal instincts are endearing.

I don't much like the section about cars. I think you overdid it.

Would have been nice if you expounded upon the scene with the dealer. If nothing else, seeing Rose get irritated would have been funny.

I sure hope Rose wards the house! Gotta be ready for the inevitable siege/zombie-apocalypse/nuke-bombing, ya know?

SonOfNenji chapter 21 . 1/1
Ah, cravings...

They're all one big, messed up, happy family.

SonOfNenji chapter 19 . 1/1


p.s: Where does she keep all that air?
SonOfNenji chapter 18 . 1/1
The situatiin with Mystique is interesting.

More importantly, I feel Irene is right about her gift-curse.

Knowing fate makes her more vulnerable to Fate's manipulations. In this case, she's going to fall victim to a self-fulfilling prophesy.

I am unsure what she knows about Magic, or its existance, but it's highly likely she could be healed by it if she just asked.

Because of her own prophesy, she won't. Therefore, it will come true.

A whole soddin' Catch 22.

SonOfNenji chapter 17 . 1/1
Dem bunnies be working...

In other news, Jean is a telepath. Sometimes an unintentional telepath.

How can she be so naive when she KNOWS what's in people's head, how come she didn't take even a peak into Duncycan (out of curiosity, if nothing else), and how come she even didn't get one by accident?

Surely a mighty telepath like her could at least read people a little bit? She's had practice putting thoughts to faces. She should know better.

SonOfNenji chapter 15 . 1/1
Looking forward to the exploration of Laura as a character.

In other news- the plot thickens...

SonOfNenji chapter 14 . 1/1
Thou need not worry, sir Author.

Thy writings are sweet like a fine wine, enflavored with age!

Excuse me, I'm gonna go get drunk. *shambles off*

SonOfNenji chapter 13 . 1/1
Damn... that was sweet.

White Owl becomes more succesful, Wanda escaping a dangerous situation, a major source of conflict resolved.

Now if only Kurt and Wanda could make up... D'aww.

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