Reviews for White Owl
SonOfNenji chapter 12 . 1/1
Poor Wanda... :(

I hope everything turns out alright.

SonOfNenji chapter 10 . 1/1
Thank you for the song reference. I enjoyed listening to it, and it provokes some thought about our herbivore-carnival instincts.

Peace, war, defense, offense, fight to gain, fight to protect...

We're certainly showing our biological nature. A big problem is our adaptability may end up killing us if we can't keep our defense better than our offense.

As for this chapter?
I really like the plot progression, though I feel like Rose is getting involved too quickly...

At least artially because word of her abilities spreading about willy nilly could prove catastrophic.

Digital memory and recording makes keeping the masquarade harder, so hiding becomes more and more important, and the more primitive Masquarade of mutants could end up crashing BOTH Masquarades down to the ground...

On the other hoof (wing?), mutants knowledge of technology and the modern muggle world could work well with the Magical World's mystic methods of hiding and subterfuge; helping both grouos of people stay safe if they could work together!

So... yeah?


SonOfNenji chapter 9 . 1/1
And back to normal!

I am so glad this was resolved peacefully.

Of course, it would help if you edited the previous chappie some day to explain WHY the robber decided to rob their specific store. (or you can touch more on him later. Maybe contemplation before/after an interrogation? Or he can just talk about it during said interrogation, raising some eyebrows for the inevitable trouble Rose tends to attract)...

Anyhow, this opens up whole new avenues to pursue!

There's the relation between magic and mutation(?), or maybe 'creatures' are just ancient 'mutations' that propigated(vise-versa?)...

There's the increasing trouble with maintaining The Masquarade on more and more fronts...

There's the whole Voldemort issue and muggles(?) gaining magical abilities...

...Yay world-building!

SonOfNenji chapter 8 . 1/1
That robbery felt too contrived, and brought forth issues I am not sure I would be comfortable with.

Like the next chapter introducing all-out-war and the shattering of the Masquarade, for example...

And all because of one little, magically petrified robber.

Funny how that works, isn't it?

SonOfNenji chapter 7 . 1/1
The budding relationship with Rouge is awkwardly charming. Also raises the question of why Rouge can touch her.

As always, Rose is unfortunately prone to attracting all kinds of attention. You can't help but pity her for that.

This chapter raises some interesting questions regarding: Occlumancy, Cerebro, and the various types of 'mutant(?)' telepathy.


p.s: God I love world-building!
SonOfNenji chapter 6 . 1/1
The success and influence of White Owl, and the scene with Wanda are both keeping me really into this story.

Just another feather to put in your cap, I suppose!

SonOfNenji chapter 4 . 1/1
The plot thickensssssssssssssss...

SonOfNenji chapter 3 . 1/1
Fondly-amused, embarrassed exasperation.

Poor Ororo. Poor, dear Ororo... She's gonna be blushing...

SonOfNenji chapter 2 . 1/1
It's really good.

Power trip aside, your format and your characters keep me interested.

This is the type of story I'd keep reading gleefully so long as there's anything to read (or so it seems so far).


SonOfNenji chapter 1 . 1/1
Well... that escalated quickly!

In other news, I was laughing incredulously throughout this chapter.

That was the most shameless and amazing power-trip I have EVER seen!

I salute thee!

Danyael Prince chapter 24 . 12/29/2014
Nice fic so far...

Kinda exited about the potential of this fic as well...
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 24 . 12/13/2014
Nice can't wait for the next chapter.
theronjohn325 chapter 24 . 12/12/2014
Is there going to be a meeting between Rose and Magneto anytime soon? Update soon.
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 10 . 12/11/2014
NIce battle!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 9 . 12/11/2014
Great chapter!
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