Reviews for White Owl
SonOfNenji chapter 8 . 1/1
That robbery felt too contrived, and brought forth issues I am not sure I would be comfortable with.

Like the next chapter introducing all-out-war and the shattering of the Masquarade, for example...

And all because of one little, magically petrified robber.

Funny how that works, isn't it?

SonOfNenji chapter 7 . 1/1
The budding relationship with Rouge is awkwardly charming. Also raises the question of why Rouge can touch her.

As always, Rose is unfortunately prone to attracting all kinds of attention. You can't help but pity her for that.

This chapter raises some interesting questions regarding: Occlumancy, Cerebro, and the various types of 'mutant(?)' telepathy.


p.s: God I love world-building!
SonOfNenji chapter 6 . 1/1
The success and influence of White Owl, and the scene with Wanda are both keeping me really into this story.

Just another feather to put in your cap, I suppose!

SonOfNenji chapter 4 . 1/1
The plot thickensssssssssssssss...

SonOfNenji chapter 3 . 1/1
Fondly-amused, embarrassed exasperation.

Poor Ororo. Poor, dear Ororo... She's gonna be blushing...

SonOfNenji chapter 2 . 1/1
It's really good.

Power trip aside, your format and your characters keep me interested.

This is the type of story I'd keep reading gleefully so long as there's anything to read (or so it seems so far).


SonOfNenji chapter 1 . 1/1
Well... that escalated quickly!

In other news, I was laughing incredulously throughout this chapter.

That was the most shameless and amazing power-trip I have EVER seen!

I salute thee!

Danyael Prince chapter 24 . 12/29/2014
Nice fic so far...

Kinda exited about the potential of this fic as well...
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 24 . 12/13/2014
Nice can't wait for the next chapter.
theronjohn325 chapter 24 . 12/12/2014
Is there going to be a meeting between Rose and Magneto anytime soon? Update soon.
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 10 . 12/11/2014
NIce battle!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 9 . 12/11/2014
Great chapter!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 8 . 12/11/2014
Secret is out!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 7 . 12/11/2014
Excellent chapter!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 6 . 12/11/2014
Nice way to make an impression
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