|Reviews for Saving Shadows|
| Metsubou chapter 10 . 6/11/2012
Yes, your story is good, I have nothing against. Though I prefer to read story's more about Hao, what with him being my favorite character, heh. And yes, I somewhat understand a little now as to why Hao backed off. But other than that, this chapter wasn't bad, just a little OCC stuff going on here and there, and I do hope, when Hao raped her, he had already gone Insane? Oh, and this "Huh" by the way, was to lazy to sign in at the time.
| Huh chapter 7 . 6/4/2012
Hao backed of way to easily for someone with his power. Even if someone is aware of his medium or even close to him in power, he has always kept his cool. His "gulping" and acting nervous around your character is a little annoying. I know this an ongoing trend among people who decide to do Shaman King fics, but I would like people to realize that if Hao chooses someone as his follower and the decline, he will probably stop caring at some point and move on. By the way, Hao uses the oxygen in the air to summon the S.O.F to the plain, not air. I understand that most people don't know this because the watch the anime rather than read the manga. Just to let you know, I'm not flaming you. Just giving you some pointers D
| maximus the great chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
brillant story really gud good charters enjoyed readding
| FeElInG HeR PaIn chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Aw...start of a beautiful friendship
| Fight or Flight chapter 3 . 4/16/2012
Omfg ur story is lyk AWESOME!
| Hikari Dragon i'm de Queen chapter 2 . 4/14/2012
it was actually quite good, i like Tuara, she's realli cool cnt wait 2 c whart will happen btween Ren and Tuara
| a charm chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Love it! Tuara is so badass