Reviews for A Dip In The Pool
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
It was so BEAUTIFULLLLL! All I could imagine the grandma looking at them through a window horrified at what just happened to her new pool!
yaoiandyuri chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
this story was awsome! please write more!
vampirenerd473 chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
love this! the connection is truly beautiful and I wish their love story was real !
Lunatic Yaoi Fangirl chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
This was amazing! Hot and amazing! Excellent work! Sorry for not reading the smut part, though XD
With love,
Lunatic Yaoi Fangirl666
FakeOfNico chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
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Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
EWW I don't think grandma will want to swim in the pool anymore.
LEE chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
THATS JUST GAY MAN GAY.I HATE THAT STORY NEXT TIME HAVE ETHAN HUMPING THAT WOULD BE MORE COOLER AND BETTER.
i am sloth chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
OuO this was windeful OuO more please OuO
MAFITA chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Loved it! Would love to read a sequel! :D Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
bravebuizel012 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
i like your stories and think you should keep writing more stories like this but please dont make hem a whole bunch one of benny and ethan with a story behind it with some slash.
AlbyLovesNewt chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
That rocked my world.
AndyLeeHoran chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
I love it XD
chocolated.dreams chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
omg great ! horny bethan :D
random2crazyness chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
I really loved that! It was great!
Kurai-onii chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Oh how I wish this would really happen. (Drools.)
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