Reviews for The Mission
TichePotato chapter 7 . 4/7/2016
Just re-reading this (brilliant story btw, this site needs more fics of flash games such as raze (awesome but shunned by the "purists" who view flash games as poison)), and as a guy who plays a lot of KSP and understands orbital mechanics and spacey stuff in general, I think it would make more sense to simply use a ftl gate to propel the asteroids. That way you don't need to pay for individual ftl drives on each asteroid, only a gate that accelerates them up to ftl/near ftl speeds. Much cheaper.
TichePotato chapter 9 . 4/9/2015
Are you going to ever continue this? Because I can see it continuing over onto raze 2, and 3.
Futaba Takeshi chapter 13 . 11/23/2012
I'm reading this and yes ... $%&*(&%$#$%& SO DAMN GOOD!
Gouenji: Sorry she's in hyper mode
Gouenji: *faint*
I shouldn't let him read On The Beach
CS4 chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
Razelover CS4 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Futaba Takeshi chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
This is too much dialogue, need more details only
Triton101 chapter 4 . 6/24/2012
This is good. there's a little much dialog but that's okay. please update