Amazing!’

Amazing

Im crying, Loved this

Bravo, thank you

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Bella & Edward together

Such a great story. Thank you

Amazing story! I’m not sure how it took me this long to find it, but I’m so glad I did. It’s unique and so well written! I binged it in two days :)

Loving it honestly not a big reader but im intrested with the reveals and name drops plus having spent a good amount sleeping on pavements (ex homeless )makes me yearn for a happy ending for Isabella

Uau eu esperava algo bom, mas isso me surpreendeu.
Obrigada pela fic :)

This Chapter always has me crying. Everytime.

I loved the story but was a little disappointed with the ending. You opened up some story lines but left it hanging. The things that I left me hanging were the kids that mugged Bella. I was hoping Bella would find them and get them help or at least point them to help stations. You/Bella pointed out several landmarks that were important to her. It would have been great to create a “help station like a food/items box. Something like a vending machine. You get tokens for throwing away trash, then use the token to get an apple/food, or item (socks). (My heart goes out to homeless, especially for the children)

The progression of the relationship with Edward was good. I’m glad you didn’t rush into lemon territory with them.
Much Love
Liz

This story is so gutt wrenching and heartwarming at the same time. The way kid managed to keep believing in the goodness of people after all that she went through. You really captured her childlike behavior and reasoning and developed it throughout the story. I love your writing style. I've read it a couple of times and I'm probably going to come back to it again.

You did an awesome job! I absolutely LOVED your story! I laughed, got angry and cried.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us!

My heart broke for Bella. She’s only known disappointment…what other self-talk would she have besides that.

I didn’t expect her to run into Mr Swan.

I might be wrong but I think he’s going to have her move in with his parents…or she may run away and Jake will be there for her.